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the world i live in is crashing,
the walls iv built are crumbling,
the air i use to breathe is no longer there,
the space around me is closing,
i cant move im trapt,
what is standing on my chest i cant breath,
everything is moving,
why am i trapt,
what did i do to deserve this?,
i cant think straight ,
is this really happning ?,
everything is fading ,
i cant see,
my eyes burn what is this pain,
take it away annyone just take it away,
i cant do this let me out LET ME OUT!,
the walls fall on top of me,
i cant move what do i do,
help me please,
annyone?
my body aches,
my heart calms down,
my body stops shaking,
my mind is becoming oblivious,
why am i living in this world of confusion?,
what is life suppose to be?,
how am i suppose to live?,
ill just let my body stay numb till somone saves me from myself,
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the walls iv built are crumbling,
the air i use to breathe is no longer there,
the space around me is closing,
i cant move im trapt,
what is standing on my chest i cant breath,
everything is moving,
why am i trapt,
what did i do to deserve this?,
i cant think straight ,
is this really happning ?,
everything is fading ,
i cant see,
my eyes burn what is this pain,
take it away annyone just take it away,
i cant do this let me out LET ME OUT!,
the walls fall on top of me,
i cant move what do i do,
help me please,
annyone?
my body aches,
my heart calms down,
my body stops shaking,
my mind is becoming oblivious,
why am i living in this world of confusion?,
what is life suppose to be?,
how am i suppose to live?,
ill just let my body stay numb till somone saves me from myself,
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Published 7th Jan 2010
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11th Jan 2010 10:34pm
two lines really stuck out for me:
is this really happning ?,
and
what is life suppose to be?,
Ive had these very same thoughts/feelings.. its a fucked up place to be.. good poem.. keep writing hun!! cheers!!
is this really happning ?,
and
what is life suppose to be?,
Ive had these very same thoughts/feelings.. its a fucked up place to be.. good poem.. keep writing hun!! cheers!!
11th Jan 2010 10:41pm
i agree it is a fucked up place but u can only try to make it better right?and thank you :^]
