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olive
there is an underground story when i see this juvenile olive in bloom
of lines, of angles, of raindrops
abstract that is left unsaid
of lines, of angles, of raindrops
abstract that is left unsaid
Published 27th Aug 2019
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27th Aug 2019 9:23pm
Very simple, yet evocative. The reader really does most of the work here. Awesome!
28th Aug 2019 1:48pm
29th Feb 2024 4:07pm
I have a similar thought when driving by vineyards and orchards around where I live.
Thought provoking write.
Thought provoking write.
29th Feb 2024 4:41pm
This is one of my favorite writings. Yes I do think it often. Happened to think about it today also.
