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Morning Haiku
old coffee stains
each one gracelessly fashioned
faded by the sun
each one gracelessly fashioned
faded by the sun
Published 27th Aug 2019
Author's Note
This felt incredibly stupid at first. But since I am going in and out of my writing funk, I decided to try and write a Haiku about the first thing that caught my attention.
The wooden table I drank my morning coffee at was the fated subject.
Here it is.
The wooden table I drank my morning coffee at was the fated subject.
Here it is.
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27th Aug 2019 11:14am
What a great idea. Writing about the first thing you see. Looks like it worked.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
27th Aug 2019 2:36pm
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27th Aug 2019 2:25pm
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27th Aug 2019 2:36pm
Thank you so much, I like that it made your mind go in all kinds of directions. Nice to read this comment, BP. ;)
27th Aug 2019 4:56pm
Dear D,
Poetry is everywhere when you let it. Or something of this nature.
As for the table it looks like a face to me, eyes, nose, the reddish bit looks like some blush gone rogue and the darker stains- beauty marks.
I kind of thought it was more graceful in that the table was there for you to sit, relax and start the morning in a quiet reverent manner.
Haiku congrats. Love it. H🌷
Poetry is everywhere when you let it. Or something of this nature.
As for the table it looks like a face to me, eyes, nose, the reddish bit looks like some blush gone rogue and the darker stains- beauty marks.
I kind of thought it was more graceful in that the table was there for you to sit, relax and start the morning in a quiet reverent manner.
Haiku congrats. Love it. H🌷
27th Aug 2019 6:31pm
Thank you very much for this lovely comment, H.
I like what you see in the wood. I'm glad I'm not the only one trying to make out shapes in everything I see.
Delanee.
I like what you see in the wood. I'm glad I'm not the only one trying to make out shapes in everything I see.
Delanee.
