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Soul Hymn...
On the outside
of my whole,
Deep-in these
thoughts I go...
In mournin...
“God” ‘crest my soul’
Stay vested
in this Minds’ flow
Search never ends...
the EYE know
As I’m
starin’ at the glarin’ glow
Smearin’ stark ink
out of the shadows...
N’ still, it’s like that pill
One tends the need
to swallow...
Yet, it’s always nice
when one can
savor a ‘mental blow...’
Published 23rd Aug 2019
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23rd Aug 2019 11:24pm
This is one of your best writes, ever, PoetikOne.
It flows as a serious though; or, rings as a hymn.
It flows as a serious though; or, rings as a hymn.
23rd Aug 2019 11:29pm
Anonymous
25th Aug 2019 4:27am
Hey Poet......brilliant words to hum along with.....enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Sep 2019 11:17pm
I usually pass on poems of this nature, however this one is on my list of topics for my Single Malt discussion night...with your approval of course. <3
15th Nov 2019 2:55am
Certainly my dearest, n I’m sorry bout the very late reply, didn’t realize I had a comment I replied to...
