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BOILING POINT- Repost written with the omnitalented Katja
We gasp and shiver
as the icy water collides
with our hot flesh
was this cold shower
your idea?
writhing as the clear droplets
plunge down my spine
extinguishing my passion
are you laughing at me?
well stop
it’s too damn sexy
With your hair slicked back
and face washed clean
of yesterday’s makeup
your natural beauty
invigorates my desire
spellbound by your emerald eyes
I pull you close
erect ruby red nipples
seem to penetrate my chest
our lips meet
pressed so ardently
as never to separate
defying all science
we burst into flame
amid the cascading, frigid stream
My ego,
made flaccid by the cold,
triples length and breadth
in the firm grasp
of your delicate fingers
sliding back and forth
in libidinous rhythm
more gently massaging
aching fleshy seed pods
you smile
pleased with the results
of your labour
giggles drown
on my lips
when caressed by
cool beads &
the warm press
of your mouth,
overcome
by mounting desire,
mingled sensations of
hot & cold
as i glide
against your slick skin
and my knee finds
your hip
so my heat
might find yours
in a moist grind
of want,
a sweet
aching
plea of desperation
to feel
your length slide
deep
into
the gentle clench
of my flesh
fingers
guide your demand
towards
the soft edges
of my femininity
arms & legs tangle
for stability
in the soak
of clean & need
beneath kneading hands
clutching to draw you
closer...
Published 22nd Aug 2019
| Edited 15th Oct 2019
Author's Note
Lately it's been so frick'in hot 'roun these parts. I thought I'd repost a cold shower written with Katja with whom nothing stays cold for very long.
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22nd Aug 2019 6:58pm
I thought I had read this one before!
It was nice seeing Katja's name again, even if it was only in a title!
It was nice seeing Katja's name again, even if it was only in a title!
22nd Aug 2019 7:02pm
I miss her on the site. She invites me periodically to join her in a song on Smule. I hope she's okay health wise.
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28th Aug 2019 11:31pm
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28th Aug 2019 11:55pm
15th Oct 2019 5:35am
This was extra intense. You both brought the heat in this collab...that 2nd stanza.. shew!!! I'm glad for the repost, indeed. You should do more together! 🔥
I am thrilled that you enjoyed this piece. That you really liked the 2nd makes me imagine sapphire eyes in the scenario. 😌 Katja and I do enjoy an occasional writing tryste 😁. We, you and I, can try a collab as well.
15th Oct 2019 5:56pm
*bats eyelashes adorning the sapphire orbs* Sure!! Throw something my way & I'll try my best to slay! I'm horrible when it cums to choosing subject matter...😁
15th Oct 2019 9:58pm
16th Oct 2019 3:32am
Sounds good. There are some tough ones out there, but do believe there is a really smutty, sexual desires one. Smut is kind of difficult these days, and we're too sensual
(I believe, for such a collab). Crims dark write has surprisingly brought some out. I'm not done yet, but quite surprised! I'll stew on ideas myself too..
(I believe, for such a collab). Crims dark write has surprisingly brought some out. I'm not done yet, but quite surprised! I'll stew on ideas myself too..
