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This Feeling
invisible waves of movement
moving between the lines of my mind
searching to find
the experience just around the corner
things feel fast
but look so slow
but in time will blend to become the world i know
everything's fresh and new
and a mystery
on a different frequency
tune in to see
what's lifted me
moving between the lines of my mind
searching to find
the experience just around the corner
things feel fast
but look so slow
but in time will blend to become the world i know
everything's fresh and new
and a mystery
on a different frequency
tune in to see
what's lifted me
Published 16th Dec 2011
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16th Dec 2011 5:48pm
I like the whole poem except for the last two lines. They feel like throw away lines. Its a shame because itīs a good poem. Tell what has lifted you instead of telling me that you have been lifted. Still I like the poem
27th Dec 2011 5:38am
30th Jan 2012 5:09am
very manic n in the rush! i can empathize with the sensation. liked the jagged flow. has potential for music, for sure!
