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Million Dollar Lobotomy
Sold me on a dream
lies weaved
with hope
choking my soul,
a baited line cast into
an empty lake
dredged up nothing,
sell fantasies to my heart
and I'll pickle your frontal lobe.
lies weaved
with hope
choking my soul,
a baited line cast into
an empty lake
dredged up nothing,
sell fantasies to my heart
and I'll pickle your frontal lobe.
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Re. Million Dollar Lobotomy Motherfucker
Yikes! I Likes!
aDVicE: Strike motherf***er from the title & put it in the poom itself.......or not.
Tag it to the next2last line....&don't forget the comma, f'Godsakes.**
**Now, like, do as i say, & you're sure to become a fabulous, world renowned poot just like ME !!
"and I'll pickle your frontal lobe. " --- sweet ! bullseye !
aDVicE: Strike motherf***er from the title & put it in the poom itself.......or not.
Tag it to the next2last line....&don't forget the comma, f'Godsakes.**
**Now, like, do as i say, & you're sure to become a fabulous, world renowned poot just like ME !!
"and I'll pickle your frontal lobe. " --- sweet ! bullseye !
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Re: Re. Million Dollar Lobotomy Motherfucker
21st Aug 2019 8:35pm
Lol i removed motherfucker from the title ๐๐๐๐ thank you for your unwavering support. You the shit!
Re. Million Dollar Lobotomy Motherfucker
21st Aug 2019 8:23pm
Sometimes this is the only way to say what you gotta say, they don't deserve anything more or less!!
Your delivery always had a punch Nik, so good.
Your delivery always had a punch Nik, so good.
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