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Cocaine~laced Whiskey
One drop
one lick
one sniff
is
all
you
need
Yet the craving never leaves
Goblets overflow
lips, tits and nose
wearing the kiss of death
lightly sprinkled from Satan's snow white glitter
Lick it up
sniff it up
just dont fuck it up
Will you welcome all of her lies?
Wash it all down fast and hard
body becomes numb yet alive
nothing else compares
nothing else matters
Cocaine~laced whiskey
sexy beast screams my name
strength in numbers they say
a fifth peppered with a gram is my fucking equation
Only the strong survive
This is penance all wrapped up in one
no holy water needed
unless its amber colored
dusted heavily
Red~stained kisses
tickled with snow
smelling of stale bars
have always been my favorite
no one ever gets absolved for free
one lick
one sniff
is
all
you
need
Yet the craving never leaves
Goblets overflow
lips, tits and nose
wearing the kiss of death
lightly sprinkled from Satan's snow white glitter
Lick it up
sniff it up
just dont fuck it up
Will you welcome all of her lies?
Wash it all down fast and hard
body becomes numb yet alive
nothing else compares
nothing else matters
Cocaine~laced whiskey
sexy beast screams my name
strength in numbers they say
a fifth peppered with a gram is my fucking equation
Only the strong survive
This is penance all wrapped up in one
no holy water needed
unless its amber colored
dusted heavily
Red~stained kisses
tickled with snow
smelling of stale bars
have always been my favorite
no one ever gets absolved for free
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Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
17th Aug 2019 00:21am
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17th Aug 2019 00:28am
Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
17th Aug 2019 00:30am
this is special, it resonates with the concept of a real addiction, it is raw and unforgiving the last stanza is perfect and really original
"Red~stained kisses
tickled with snow
smelling of stale bars
have always been my favorite"
very honest - in your face - excellent ink and easy RL add :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
"Red~stained kisses
tickled with snow
smelling of stale bars
have always been my favorite"
very honest - in your face - excellent ink and easy RL add :-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
17th Aug 2019 00:33am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
17th Aug 2019 1:00am
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17th Aug 2019 1:06am
Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
17th Aug 2019 2:33am
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17th Aug 2019 3:03pm
Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
17th Aug 2019 5:26am
Trials of life for many
For many it leaves for some it doesn't really leave
Interesting write
Cant say I've tried either whiskey or cocaine because I haven't, so I'll take your word on how exhilarating liberating it was and is
Love the honesty of your words
For many it leaves for some it doesn't really leave
Interesting write
Cant say I've tried either whiskey or cocaine because I haven't, so I'll take your word on how exhilarating liberating it was and is
Love the honesty of your words
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Re: Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
17th Aug 2019 3:05pm
Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
Anonymous
17th Aug 2019 6:43pm
Mysterious.. very powerful ink.. really felt this one.. into the list it belongs.. love always..
Dave
Dave
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19th Aug 2019 1:57am
Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
19th Aug 2019 9:13am
Re: Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
20th Aug 2019 3:07am
thanks chees. its a game I no longer wish to play but when I did, I won every game. <3
Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
22nd Aug 2019 1:29am
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. You are a talented writer.
I especially liked the lines (No pun intended)
"Wash it all down fast and hard
body becomes numb yet alive"
Great stuff - Syd
I especially liked the lines (No pun intended)
"Wash it all down fast and hard
body becomes numb yet alive"
Great stuff - Syd
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Re: Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
27th Aug 2019 3:24am
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
30th Aug 2019 8:45pm
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Re: Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
30th Aug 2019 8:48pm
I couldnt agree more. It was a pleasure and certainly caused a distinct amount of pain. Reminiscent of days that were reckless and carefree yet no longer exist.And in the end, without these moments I would not be the mysterious lady I am right now. Thank deary. <3
Re. Cocaine~laced Whiskey
2nd Sep 2019 8:38am
I was late on this one
Too much medical marijuana
Great poem by the way
Cyber hug s
Too much medical marijuana
Great poem by the way
Cyber hug s
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5th Sep 2019 00:11am