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Mess
I wrote a poem today
I hate it so
I hate it so
The words sound like nonsense
And I've gone and fucked up the context
Broken things need not be fixed
Sometimes beauty can be messy
Sometimes beauty is purely empty
I hate it so
I hate it so
The words sound like nonsense
And I've gone and fucked up the context
Broken things need not be fixed
Sometimes beauty can be messy
Sometimes beauty is purely empty
Published 16th Aug 2019
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16th Aug 2019 7:22pm
Dear D,
You’ve just described my day in eight lines. Tomorrow is a new day with new solutions. As for today, I’m going to leave it the empty mess it became.
Thanks for not letting me be alone in this. Well done! H🌷
You’ve just described my day in eight lines. Tomorrow is a new day with new solutions. As for today, I’m going to leave it the empty mess it became.
Thanks for not letting me be alone in this. Well done! H🌷
16th Aug 2019 8:23pm
