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Where's My Hallelujah
When the day is long and my peace is gone
I'm tired and toiled and the plans go foiled
I need my Hallelujah
When all I have left is my last breath
I've given my all and I begin to fall
I reach for my Hallelujah
The rain comes in with the whipping wind
The night is frightful and surely spiteful
Where's my Hallelujah
I'm looking for reprieve
I'm in need of relief
Allow me to grieve
Set me free
My Hallelujah
Where's my Hallelujah
When I'm all cried out and I scream and shout
My heart breaks and my body aches
I need my Hallelujah
When I'm filled with hate in an angered state
I'm stomping down with fire around
I reach for my Hallelujah
The sun goes down and love is not found
The day is lonely and I feel homely
Where's my Hallelujah
I'm looking for reprieve
I'm in need of relief
Allow me to grieve
Set me free
My Hallelujah
Where's my Hallelujah
When all is lost and hope is tossed
My faith is tested and my soul is restless
I need my Hallelujah
The stars have fallen and the Angels are callin'
My world has frosted, My soul is exhausted
I reach for my Hallelujah
Where's my Hallelujah
My Hallelujah
Set me free
Allow me to grieve
I'm in need of relief
I'm looking for reprieve
Where's my Hallelujah
I'm tired and toiled and the plans go foiled
I need my Hallelujah
When all I have left is my last breath
I've given my all and I begin to fall
I reach for my Hallelujah
The rain comes in with the whipping wind
The night is frightful and surely spiteful
Where's my Hallelujah
I'm looking for reprieve
I'm in need of relief
Allow me to grieve
Set me free
My Hallelujah
Where's my Hallelujah
When I'm all cried out and I scream and shout
My heart breaks and my body aches
I need my Hallelujah
When I'm filled with hate in an angered state
I'm stomping down with fire around
I reach for my Hallelujah
The sun goes down and love is not found
The day is lonely and I feel homely
Where's my Hallelujah
I'm looking for reprieve
I'm in need of relief
Allow me to grieve
Set me free
My Hallelujah
Where's my Hallelujah
When all is lost and hope is tossed
My faith is tested and my soul is restless
I need my Hallelujah
The stars have fallen and the Angels are callin'
My world has frosted, My soul is exhausted
I reach for my Hallelujah
Where's my Hallelujah
My Hallelujah
Set me free
Allow me to grieve
I'm in need of relief
I'm looking for reprieve
Where's my Hallelujah
Published 16th Aug 2019
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16th Aug 2019 2:37am
16th Aug 2019 2:39am
This is beautifully stated and a testimony to the core of one's soul and let the church say, Amen, nicely penned poetess
16th Aug 2019 2:41am
16th Aug 2019 2:47am
16th Aug 2019 2:41am
When I'm filled with rage in an angered stage
How about When I'm filled with hate in an angered state
Would make more sense
How about When I'm filled with hate in an angered state
Would make more sense
16th Aug 2019 2:43am
I know, lol, I'm Billy Snagg; of course it works! Maybe we should write something together one day. By the way, I believe this is your strongest poem yet. I especially like the verses:
"When all is lost and hope is tossed
My faith is tested and my soul is restless
I need my Hallelujah
The stars have fallen and the Angels are callin'
My world has frosted, My soul is exhausted
I reach for my Hallelujah "
"When all is lost and hope is tossed
My faith is tested and my soul is restless
I need my Hallelujah
The stars have fallen and the Angels are callin'
My world has frosted, My soul is exhausted
I reach for my Hallelujah "
16th Aug 2019 2:50am
Thank you and I like that verse too. Was impressing myself there. And yes, we can collaborate, that would be fun.
16th Aug 2019 2:52am
Your talent is starting to shine through. Soon you will be blowing us away with your words or knocking our socks off, which is just as good! ;-)
16th Aug 2019 3:00am
I've got more up my ink well, don't worry. And thanks for the encouragement.
16th Aug 2019 3:03am
I like it! More in the can huh, just waiting to be unleashed?
There can be no greater feeling. ;-)
There can be no greater feeling. ;-)
21st Aug 2019 9:16am
22nd Aug 2019 9:54pm
Thank you! Yes I was imagining this being a song. Just dont know the tune.
Thanks for stopping by.
Thanks for stopping by.
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