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If You
If you listen....
Listen very carefully
You can hear my heart breaking
It’s a lonely hollow sound
That follows me around
If you look....
Look very carefully
You might see behind my mask
The smile of a broken clown
Who sees the world upside down
If you touch....
Touch very carefully
You will feel my pain
I am an open sore
Beaten down to the core
An empty shell
I’ve nothing left to tell
Listen very carefully
You can hear my heart breaking
It’s a lonely hollow sound
That follows me around
If you look....
Look very carefully
You might see behind my mask
The smile of a broken clown
Who sees the world upside down
If you touch....
Touch very carefully
You will feel my pain
I am an open sore
Beaten down to the core
An empty shell
I’ve nothing left to tell
Published 15th Aug 2019
Author's Note
A really old poem I wrote way back in 2011
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15th Aug 2019 10:46am
Wow! You showed great potential in form and insight back then. You've come quite a long way, AP.
15th Aug 2019 10:57am
15th Aug 2019 10:58am
15th Aug 2019 11:03am
How original looked ,,,,,
If you listen
Listen very carefully
You can hear my heart breaking
It’s a lonely hollow sound
That follows me around
If you look
Look very carefully
You might see behind my mask
The smile of a broken clown
Who sees the world upside down
If you touch
Touch very carefully
You will feel my pain
I am an open sore
Beaten down to the core
An empty shell
I’ve nothing left to tell
If you listen
Listen very carefully
You can hear my heart breaking
It’s a lonely hollow sound
That follows me around
If you look
Look very carefully
You might see behind my mask
The smile of a broken clown
Who sees the world upside down
If you touch
Touch very carefully
You will feel my pain
I am an open sore
Beaten down to the core
An empty shell
I’ve nothing left to tell
15th Aug 2019 11:16am
15th Aug 2019 12:10pm
Often the honesty from our words help with the healing process
Theres much honesty in your writes
🙏👌🤗
Theres much honesty in your writes
🙏👌🤗
15th Aug 2019 1:43pm
I hope You've moved from thinking You're a clown
because You're ink TODAY is often incredible
and gives cause for further thought.
because You're ink TODAY is often incredible
and gives cause for further thought.
15th Aug 2019 2:01pm
TRUTH SPOKEN INDEED THE THINGS WE GO THROUGH HAVE A WAY OF ESCAPING FROM THE SPIRIT AS WELL AS THE INNER SOUL...BUT YOU CANT LET THINGS ALTER YOUR LIFE OR WORLD FOR YOU HAVE TO CREATE A WORLD OF BALANCE WITH STABILITY OF MIND AND HEART...NICELY SPILLED
