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society
The screams of the silent.
crys of the unwanted
society claims they have a voice yet we've yet to hear
we've yet to hear a sentene, a word, a sound
society claims they have a safe place for them
where ,where is it
oh is this the place the damaged ,unhinged door that reads do not enter
society claims to love the weak, the broken, and the used ,but it doesn't
it has places to make you "better" they do help somewhat ,but you can't help but feel silently judged
the rules of society
we all go along what choice do we have
its all we know
crys of the unwanted
society claims they have a voice yet we've yet to hear
we've yet to hear a sentene, a word, a sound
society claims they have a safe place for them
where ,where is it
oh is this the place the damaged ,unhinged door that reads do not enter
society claims to love the weak, the broken, and the used ,but it doesn't
it has places to make you "better" they do help somewhat ,but you can't help but feel silently judged
the rules of society
we all go along what choice do we have
its all we know
Published 16th Dec 2011
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16th Dec 2011 2:10am
4th line down sentence. Ha got you this time. You came along way fast. I feel that your holding something back that you really want to say. You have the ambition and the drive. Now get the power going. Thier is a quote by a group called D.I.R. It goes " you think you look good in your new uniform. Starched and pressed in the perfect norm. Loaded up like a truck load of cattle. Sent off to slaughter in a usless battle. Always sent off to die. Never knowing the reason why. F---k the system they can't have me. I don't need society. It's a trash punk song.
16th Dec 2011 11:39am
your half right i do want to say something but im not allowed to if i did there would be massive fights and arrest in my house....and thanks it feels good when someone tells me im amazing poet not just "your poem is to ndepressing it makes me wanna jump off a brige" :3
16th Dec 2011 12:15pm
and even if i said something no one would care enough to listen to me any way....
16th Dec 2011 3:00am
society has complete control on us, all that disobey, all who try and act themselves are deemed outlaws and freaks; society is a hell masked to be heaven.
16th Dec 2011 11:40am
well yeah its kinda obvious in ever day life but no one has the guts to change it even when they do stand up they are cut down and silenced-i dont think i spelled that rite hmm whatever-
16th Dec 2011 6:19pm
The truth is society does not like the truth. They would rather listen to dumbass people like Doctor Phil ( which I would love to stab with a spork ). No book exists for conformity unless you express that in the " Good Book ". We are all different that's why they call us individuals! However society has labeled us all the same. Once again F--k society!
16th Dec 2011 8:03pm
society would be good if it wasnt backwards it does keep stability in a way but it really doesnt help any one
