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PATH INSIGHT
There is a path
In sight
And a path
Out of sight
And to walk both
Your eyes must be
Open and
Closed at
The same time
In sight
And a path
Out of sight
And to walk both
Your eyes must be
Open and
Closed at
The same time
Published 7th Aug 2019
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7th Aug 2019 7:25am
7th Aug 2019 5:34pm
7th Aug 2019 2:59pm
Damn. Problem is, it makes me dizzy and I lose my footing...
I sense the deep truth in this, although it's slippery to pinpoint what it actually means. Well expressed.
I sense the deep truth in this, although it's slippery to pinpoint what it actually means. Well expressed.
7th Aug 2019 5:37pm
Thanks. If I walk the path with my eyes closed, I get scared that I will bump into things, even though my feet can tell me when I'm off the path and I can correct. I do encourage trying this relatively harmless (depending on the surroundings, of course) leap of faith at times.
7th Aug 2019 6:29pm
I actually love walking in the dark. I rarely use a flashlight when I'm camping.... I'll have to try navigating with my eyes closed sometime.
In the metaphorical sense, it gets more complicated. Or maybe I just need more practice....
In the metaphorical sense, it gets more complicated. Or maybe I just need more practice....
7th Aug 2019 7:10pm
The eyes closed thing really works for clearing the mind, but it's really hard to make yourself do it for the required amount of time (20 seconds at least)
7th Aug 2019 5:24pm
Bravo! While physical sight is important, internal guidance is more so in regards to direction.
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