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Daddy Does
The sweet taste of little girl
fresh on Daddys lips.
Condemned ro be a pervert,
the illness of his mind.
Of course he loves his daughter,
she's his baby girl.
He was there when she
learned to walk and
when she skinned her knee.
When she begs him,
his heart hurts for jis
precious
little
angel.
He whispers,
"I'll keep you safe
tonight. Just saty
in Daddy's arms.
I love you my sweet girl."
And he really does.
fresh on Daddys lips.
Condemned ro be a pervert,
the illness of his mind.
Of course he loves his daughter,
she's his baby girl.
He was there when she
learned to walk and
when she skinned her knee.
When she begs him,
his heart hurts for jis
precious
little
angel.
He whispers,
"I'll keep you safe
tonight. Just saty
in Daddy's arms.
I love you my sweet girl."
And he really does.
Published 14th Dec 2011
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- Edited 3rd May 2022 5:45am
14th Dec 2011 5:03pm
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14th Dec 2011 10:12pm
It's clear to me he does, if it were a beating, he would not talk so tenderly. His mind is twisted and he feels what he is doing is love. She tells him to stop, but he goes on to hold her in his arms, as if protecting her from some other danger, unable to see the danger of his touch. I hope this is a work of creativity, but if it has any basis in reality, he needs to be imprisoned where with a big ugly cell mate who has been alone for a very long time. JJ
14th Dec 2011 11:28pm
26th Dec 2011 7:40pm
22nd Mar 2012 3:23am
That was a disturbing piece, but it was very deep. I loved it. You might want to check the spelling of some of it though.
