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silence versus verse
Stillness is... a state of mind,
silence has its place…
verse saves it ...the memory...
for another day.
silence has its place…
verse saves it ...the memory...
for another day.
Written by
Ely
(E.A.Rothwell)
Published 28th Jul 2019
Author's Note
Written with "silence vs verse", comp in mind...
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
28th Jul 2019 5:06am
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Re. silence versus verse
especially nowadays
It's a blessing the desert has places...
where there is only the breeze .
..Hugs, ELY
It's a blessing the desert has places...
where there is only the breeze .
..Hugs, ELY
Re. silence versus verse
28th Jul 2019 2:12pm
Re. silence versus verse
28th Jul 2019 4:12pm
Good point, Speak...that's what they say
long use is on your side
but just like any known cliché
needs care how it's applied...
Hugs, Ely
long use is on your side
but just like any known cliché
needs care how it's applied...
Hugs, Ely
Re. silence versus verse
28th Jul 2019 4:38pm
Excellent Ely!! I always need my daily dose of silence in some way but sometimes its just never found
A desert would be dope for sure!
Great piece Ely I love it! 👏🙌
A desert would be dope for sure!
Great piece Ely I love it! 👏🙌
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Re: Re. silence versus verse
1st Aug 2019 6:16am
thanks, Hunter...appreciate the good word...nothing like a little peace and quiet.glad you could relate...hugs... Ely
Re. silence versus verse
28th Jul 2019 5:07pm
Re: Re. silence versus verse
28th Jul 2019 8:27pm
Glad you enjoyed it...MsAme... I enjoyed penning it too.
Stop by anytime for a visit...and thank you
Very much for stopping in... and for the good word...have a great day... Ely
Stop by anytime for a visit...and thank you
Very much for stopping in... and for the good word...have a great day... Ely
Re. silence versus verse
28th Jul 2019 11:35pm
One of my favorite philosophical quotes is by the great Roman Stoic Philosopher, Seneca...The primary sign of a well ordered mind is a persons ability to remain in one place and linger in their own company. Silence is the golden rule and your wonderful poem is golden Ely...ah sorry Mr. Frost lol.
Cheers...and silence...Harry
Cheers...and silence...Harry
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Re. silence versus verse
Thank you, Harry...alone ain't necessarily silent...
there's the cicadas that sing in my head...
my personal philosophy feels looking for something is limiting...
makes for expectations...not good...
Thanks for giving a home to this lonely piece...hugs... Ely
there's the cicadas that sing in my head...
my personal philosophy feels looking for something is limiting...
makes for expectations...not good...
Thanks for giving a home to this lonely piece...hugs... Ely