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This Spartan Summer Brings
Bee's brittle sting
Makes stunning heart,
Deft tying string
With Greco art.
Leaving a place
For me to find,
Turning your face
Reading my mind.
Published 24th Jul 2019
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For the "Spartan Verses" competition
(entries no longer than 25 words)
(entries no longer than 25 words)
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24th Jul 2019 12:03pm
28th Jul 2019 7:29pm
25th Jul 2019 11:17am
Kathy, I love all the imagery & meaning I’m getting from this short verse. And the bonus of its tight little rhyme gives it a kick in the meter... Well done!
