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Holiday Haiku IV
to the mountain top
Viking music in my ears
feeling infinite
Viking music in my ears
feeling infinite
Published 17th Jul 2019
Author's Note
Finding a suitable playlist when I travel is crucial to me. It always helps me get lost entirely in what I'm seeing all around.
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17th Jul 2019 7:54pm
This is a really good Western haiku, delanee. It follows the Eastern premise of no caps or punctuation, and the 'fragment' is excellently defined as either the first or last line - which is exceptional, as there should only be one break in grammar. This means you can read it either/or. Well done.
17th Jul 2019 10:01pm
Thank you for this praise, Ahavati. I sincerely have never attempted haikus before and so I wanted to dabble with them on my trip. Needless to say it's nice to read this comment!
Delanee.
Delanee.
17th Jul 2019 10:08pm
17th Jul 2019 10:11pm
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
17th Jul 2019 10:10pm
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17th Jul 2019 10:13pm
Oh it is!! Watching the mountains and valleys and rivers go by with that on full volumes just gives me chills.
And thank you, HF. 😊
And thank you, HF. 😊
17th Jan 2020 8:46pm
17th Jan 2020 11:29pm
