This is a really good Western haiku, delanee. It follows the Eastern premise of no caps or punctuation, and the 'fragment' is excellently defined as either the first or last line - which is exceptional, as there should only be one break in grammar. This means you can read it either/or. Well done.
Thank you for this praise, Ahavati. I sincerely have never attempted haikus before and so I wanted to dabble with them on my trip. Needless to say it's nice to read this comment!