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I was looking for you, my saviour
by the chocolate section of my local shop.
you were there
white wrappers, red letters
sitting proudly among others
by the chocolate section of my local shop.
you were there
white wrappers, red letters
sitting proudly among others
Published 16th Jul 2019
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16th Jul 2019 9:01pm
16th Jul 2019 9:22pm
Clever in its brevity! I relate all our 'Saviours' to neon lights amid the mundane through our eyes! The simple things in life are the best. Good to see you back Ophie!
the searched yearned looking...n how elevated the heightening presence of what is the search...in all purity & passion...
The verses highlight a brightening feel n a righteous simplistic soul's deep find ..out of all the rolling daily blues.
Loved how you spin in potential intensities in your mastered brevities as ever..
Welcome back Ophie ..missed you were! xx:)
The verses highlight a brightening feel n a righteous simplistic soul's deep find ..out of all the rolling daily blues.
Loved how you spin in potential intensities in your mastered brevities as ever..
Welcome back Ophie ..missed you were! xx:)
20th Jul 2019 3:34pm
9th Sep 2019 3:22am
9th Oct 2019 6:49pm
9th Oct 2019 9:30pm
tis a treat to read you
again and again
shall till the end of again
not many years
now remain
again and again
shall till the end of again
not many years
now remain
9th Apr 2020 4:05pm
9th Apr 2020 5:55pm
like anyone else's
my days are also numbered too
CORONA IS RED
THEY SAY DEATH MAY ANY DAY BE DUE
PLEASE DO READ ME
CONTINUE
WHERE EVER UR SIS
TWILL BE SO KIND OF YOU
remember again too
my days are also numbered too
CORONA IS RED
THEY SAY DEATH MAY ANY DAY BE DUE
PLEASE DO READ ME
CONTINUE
WHERE EVER UR SIS
TWILL BE SO KIND OF YOU
remember again too
10th Apr 2020 3:05pm
11th Apr 2020 7:47am
hopefully not
thanks for re -communicating tc of self and family where ever u b rgds sis
thanks for re -communicating tc of self and family where ever u b rgds sis
