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Abbreviated soul
Tucked within a hidden pocket
Folded into an origami thought
Pasted by the inner vision glue
Broken near this piece of mind.
Published 11th Jul 2019
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Clock unwound by an infinite time...
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11th Jul 2019 9:09am
11th Jul 2019 7:54pm
11th Jul 2019 12:32pm
That's great. Why not write 4 more 'shorties' (3-5 lines only) and enter the collection into the comp ("A Set of 5 Short Poems") I'm currently running? {https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10886/}
11th Jul 2019 7:56pm
11th Jul 2019 1:11pm
the last verse contrasts starkly dark from other lighted verses preceding well.. .reminds of the blindly warring heady minded disintegrative greys versus the eternal soul flame cohesively abbreviated well within the within. juz me Jeff...this is concise n revealing the truths.
11th Jul 2019 7:58pm
11th Jul 2019 5:32pm
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