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The Lacemaker.
An overabundance of beauty, in time,
Diverts us, from colder aspirations
Of invisible social ritual. Just consider
The intricacies of a drawing room,
Arrayed in oriental rugs, and porcelain;
With dazzling, geometric patterns
Always changing in passages of light.
But what desires linger, in depths,
Where light itself cannot penetrate?
As pine-needles dissolve illumination
By stippled elegance, the arachnid
Remains sightless to our limited eyes;
Sheltered, to perform a danse sacrée
We glimpse only the bare traces of,
Passing through in mindless ecstasy.
Diverts us, from colder aspirations
Of invisible social ritual. Just consider
The intricacies of a drawing room,
Arrayed in oriental rugs, and porcelain;
With dazzling, geometric patterns
Always changing in passages of light.
But what desires linger, in depths,
Where light itself cannot penetrate?
As pine-needles dissolve illumination
By stippled elegance, the arachnid
Remains sightless to our limited eyes;
Sheltered, to perform a danse sacrée
We glimpse only the bare traces of,
Passing through in mindless ecstasy.
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Re. The Lacemaker
10th Jul 2019 1:57am
There is such precision in your passages, their message and emotion rendered adroitly, one has to carefully consider to do them justice. Your content is very close to something I often write about, how little we perceive of the incredible universe that is before us, in our mad self involved rush through life. Osho says that we become bored because we are seeing with the eyes of the past. The living moment is eternal and glorious. This write is such a beautiful contemplation.
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10th Jul 2019 10:08pm
For me, that is the highest possible compliment, to create a lasting impression worth returning to. Thank you, Daniel. :) Reading some of your recent pieces, I can see what you're responding to. Though not only living with "eyes of the past," but lacking mindfulness altogether.
Thinking about the decorative arts and reading on Matisse got me to consider what happens if we just consume art, beautiful objects, nature, etc. without even trying to understand what pleasure we derive and why, whether there are subtexts we miss or ignore.
Thinking about the decorative arts and reading on Matisse got me to consider what happens if we just consume art, beautiful objects, nature, etc. without even trying to understand what pleasure we derive and why, whether there are subtexts we miss or ignore.
Re. The Lacemaker
10th Jul 2019 2:59am
This poem came highly recommended by ^^ and I had to check it and I can see why my friend Daniel is blown away by its beauty. There's something about this poem that first instinct left me feeling like i was reading a poetic work of our legends in the past, timeless and elegant as I was transported in time. I am following your work now and I'm looking forward reading more. The skill and langauge you display is definitely honed and carefully crafted.
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10th Jul 2019 10:12pm
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10th Jul 2019 10:09pm
By all means (Haha,) I only hoped it wasn't (accidentally) read as some invective against beauty and art...
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