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Pretty girl in a casket
Pretty girl in a casket I wish that were me,
Laying right beside my poetry,
She looks so pretty with her makeup on,
I wonder who will miss her now that she's gone,
I she'd my tears all over the city,
And ask myself why I'm not pretty,
The pretty girl in a casket I bet she had alot of friends,
I wonder how she died and when,
I only smile for satisfaction,
Suicide is just a distraction,
I take pills just for a reaction,
The pretty girl in the casket is a beautiful attraction,
Im curious if she'll be cremated,
Or if the world will forget all the love she created,
Suicidal and lonely describe me best,
For now let's let this pretty dead girl rest.
Laying right beside my poetry,
She looks so pretty with her makeup on,
I wonder who will miss her now that she's gone,
I she'd my tears all over the city,
And ask myself why I'm not pretty,
The pretty girl in a casket I bet she had alot of friends,
I wonder how she died and when,
I only smile for satisfaction,
Suicide is just a distraction,
I take pills just for a reaction,
The pretty girl in the casket is a beautiful attraction,
Im curious if she'll be cremated,
Or if the world will forget all the love she created,
Suicidal and lonely describe me best,
For now let's let this pretty dead girl rest.
Published 9th Jul 2019
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10th Jul 2019 6:40am
11th Jul 2019 6:58pm
Welcome to the DU!
I reckon you'll fit in perfectly here!
Love the idea of this, it's really cool.
Have a look at this line, it bumps a little... Might be a type o or something similar.
"I she'd my tears all over the city, "
Thank you for sharing this and for joining our community.
Rev.
I reckon you'll fit in perfectly here!
Love the idea of this, it's really cool.
Have a look at this line, it bumps a little... Might be a type o or something similar.
"I she'd my tears all over the city, "
Thank you for sharing this and for joining our community.
Rev.
