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deserving
With light feet grazing the velvet earth
The morning sky spotted with wispy clouds
You’ll inhale deep of the rich earth scents
When you’re bowing down to her crown
Standing tall upon a podium of grandeur
Power wafting from her in palpable waves
She exudes an ethereal standard of beauty
Asking what exactly it is you really do crave
Is it true love or true beauty you seek?
Are you power hungry or self serving?
Such grace, a goddess in her own right
Do you really think you’re that deserving?
The morning sky spotted with wispy clouds
You’ll inhale deep of the rich earth scents
When you’re bowing down to her crown
Standing tall upon a podium of grandeur
Power wafting from her in palpable waves
She exudes an ethereal standard of beauty
Asking what exactly it is you really do crave
Is it true love or true beauty you seek?
Are you power hungry or self serving?
Such grace, a goddess in her own right
Do you really think you’re that deserving?
Published 9th Jul 2019
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2019 1:49pm
I am a bit at a loss for words here. This is gorgeous... That last question... Powerful...
9th Jul 2019 1:52pm
Thank you dearest Willow! And wow, this was a quick throw together so I’m shocked at the RL add! So generous❤️ Thanks for the read and comment!
9th Jul 2019 1:57pm
9th Jul 2019 1:59pm
Thanks Tim☺️ I think so too, but love is more lasting. Thanks for the read and comment!
9th Jul 2019 2:22pm
If not about love then what for? ... always love ... ones whom you love are always deserving ... the rest are simply out of luck ... wonderful piece ... Bless and much love ... .
9th Jul 2019 3:54pm
Very much so, but the ones who love you are the deserving ones, rather. I think that you can love someone and they not be deserving of that if they don’t love you in return. Ah, just a mess. Thanks, dearest Alan, for the read and comment❤️❤️
9th Jul 2019 2:29pm
Thank you, Carpe! I’m so glad it did that for you😌 thank you for the read and the comment, luv. And omg the RL add as well, thank you!
9th Jul 2019 3:40pm
The Goddess here is You, right?
This is one of the most Gorgeous spills
I've read by You!!
Wow! Wow! Holy cow!
This is one of the most Gorgeous spills
I've read by You!!
Wow! Wow! Holy cow!
Yes, I see it that way.
Oh, Tallen that’s so generous of you. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I’m glad you enjoyed this. And oh my god, the RL add, that’s so nice of you!
Oh, Tallen that’s so generous of you. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I’m glad you enjoyed this. And oh my god, the RL add, that’s so nice of you!
Anonymous
9th Jul 2019 6:13pm
Your muse senses are serving you well ! A very good piece!
9th Jul 2019 7:44pm
9th Jul 2019 9:45pm
Well if he is not 'self-servng" then yes I'm afraid he will feel deserving.
9th Jul 2019 10:37pm
Hmm, I don’t know how to respond to this Snaggy haha! Thanks for the read and comment though!
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9th Jul 2019 11:20pm
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9th Jul 2019 11:36pm
Yes, HF, you’re not wrong. I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for the read and commenting, dearest❤️
10th Jul 2019 6:06am
Liv, you choose wonderful artwork to accompany your work. This is beautifully written with rich imagery.
10th Jul 2019 6:16am
Thank you so much for saying that. And for taking the time to read and comment❤️
