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I loved you once
Strewn on the floor
Face up the Ace of Spades
I remember you then dear
The man who gazed at the stars
Born of woman's blood you are
But you had your Achilles heel
Your touch was Magic
Your voice, melodious like Pans' Music
Your name is ultimate Darkness
however, for you stray, you could not stay
Unfaithfulness was your second name
You just let fly, the lust within you
Bite me you used to whisper
I thought that sexy and cute
Now I know that's how
You say your prayers
Leave then, my faithless love
Fly through the dark night
I pray to God above
that you will be alright
Face up the Ace of Spades
I remember you then dear
The man who gazed at the stars
Born of woman's blood you are
But you had your Achilles heel
Your touch was Magic
Your voice, melodious like Pans' Music
Your name is ultimate Darkness
however, for you stray, you could not stay
Unfaithfulness was your second name
You just let fly, the lust within you
Bite me you used to whisper
I thought that sexy and cute
Now I know that's how
You say your prayers
Leave then, my faithless love
Fly through the dark night
I pray to God above
that you will be alright
Published 11th Dec 2011
| Edited 19th May 2020
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11th Dec 2011 2:19pm
11th Dec 2011 2:22pm
I like this one a lot Grace, It matches what I feel right now, very nice to read and well written.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
11th Dec 2011 2:24pm
Thanks dear Gypsy Red for reading and commenting. That is a repetition of situations in my life...:D
11th Dec 2011 3:42pm
great stuff almost as though you had a devil image overtaking the one you loved :)
11th Dec 2011 3:47pm
I liked writing that Paul because there was an episode in my life when that occurred. The competition actually encouraged me to write that. Thanks for reading and commenting.
11th Dec 2011 3:44pm
Sad when we have to experience painful love.
I hope your next one is special and all that you desire.
Great job
I hope your next one is special and all that you desire.
Great job
11th Dec 2011 3:48pm
Thanks dear Kym, from your lips to the ears of the gods, so they say. Thanks for reading and commenting.
11th Dec 2011 4:43pm
"Born of woman's blood you are
But you had your Achilles heel
Your touch was Magic
Your voice, melodious like Pans' Music"
—beautiful phrasing!
But you had your Achilles heel
Your touch was Magic
Your voice, melodious like Pans' Music"
—beautiful phrasing!
11th Dec 2011 5:26pm
Anonymous
11th Dec 2011 6:33pm
but most times if not all they find that they should have stayed - such deep thoughts - because on the flip side when they come back - the welcome mat has usually been put away - nice poem ^v^
11th Dec 2011 6:39pm
stays forever in a human heart...once they stray, they always do...:D haha! thanks for commenting nightspirit.
