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Gentle Urges
come
lets speak and pause
to listen
there is a finer place
beyond this shell
held to our ear
some
songs repose in break
and clause
in quiet notes
and finishes
from there to here
dumb
is not stupidity
it is the quiet
telling all
its truths
and complicated fear
numb
is not proclivity
it's time to open
gentler realms
of reason
with each other dear
lets speak and pause
to listen
there is a finer place
beyond this shell
held to our ear
some
songs repose in break
and clause
in quiet notes
and finishes
from there to here
dumb
is not stupidity
it is the quiet
telling all
its truths
and complicated fear
numb
is not proclivity
it's time to open
gentler realms
of reason
with each other dear
Published 7th Jul 2019
| Edited 15th Jun 2020
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18th Aug 2019 9:08pm
I find it fitting you tagged this as music. I found the syllabic harmony quite mellifluous. The gentle economy of it's length counterpoints the depth of the message adroitly. I think it is lovely writing.
Hello. I'm Daniel. It is nice to meet you. :)
Hello. I'm Daniel. It is nice to meet you. :)
20th Aug 2019 6:42am
