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Life?
I always wondered what it's all about
is it love or perseverance
cloud filled minds of incoherence
let it flow or change the course
lock it down or show your force
hide the wounds or let it bleed
and just how so am I perceived
life, a game?, or something real
play a part, cheat or steal
I think I know but am I sure
my heart it beats, for that no cure
answers, none; questions, few
I just hope to make it through
is it love or perseverance
cloud filled minds of incoherence
let it flow or change the course
lock it down or show your force
hide the wounds or let it bleed
and just how so am I perceived
life, a game?, or something real
play a part, cheat or steal
I think I know but am I sure
my heart it beats, for that no cure
answers, none; questions, few
I just hope to make it through
Published 6th Jul 2019
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6th Jul 2019 3:35pm
Good question(s), we certainly play many parts, don't we?!
But in the end, we all exist alone off the stage.
Pondering poem for sure.
But in the end, we all exist alone off the stage.
Pondering poem for sure.
Anonymous
6th Jul 2019 5:35pm
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6th Jul 2019 6:47pm
beautiful poem dearest Tim
you will make it through just fine...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
you will make it through just fine...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
6th Jul 2019 8:11pm
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6th Jul 2019 8:47pm
Life
much like the universe
is both
chaos and order
Love Your thoughts on this, Brother
much like the universe
is both
chaos and order
Love Your thoughts on this, Brother
6th Jul 2019 9:48pm
Live your life with this poetic finesse. Fine work, JusTim. May you thrive and prosper.
6th Jul 2019 11:37pm
Anonymous
8th Jul 2019 3:02pm
Man, I swear I have so many more questions than I will ever have answers for. I keep asking...sometimes I get an answer...more often, I just keep looking
9th Jul 2019 00:23am
Shakespeare said it best Tim...life is but a stage and we are all merely actors....great ink man.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
