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teachtaireacht ó athair
I mo mhúscailt le mo pháistí ag gáire
Is breá liom féachaint ar an dráma
Croí beag lómhar
Éist go cúramach leis an méid a deir siad
Brionglóidíonn siad saolta a theastaíonn uathu
A ndóchas agus a n-aislingí grámhara
Is breá liom gach nóiméad go daor
Is breá an rud é a ngrá ghlan
is mise mo domhan
Mo gach rud beag
Coinneoidh mé iad i mo chroí go deo agus i gcónaí
ón nóiméad a rugadh iad chuala mé na haingil ag canadh.
agus tú ag fás tá a fhios agam go bhfuil im anseo i gcónaí
Nuair a thagann sé chun caomhnóra tá a fhios agam nach bhfuil aon imní orm. Ná lig don domhan cuimilt síos ort
Ní féidir leat ach deora sona a chailliúint
Is breá liom féachaint ar an dráma
Croí beag lómhar
Éist go cúramach leis an méid a deir siad
Brionglóidíonn siad saolta a theastaíonn uathu
A ndóchas agus a n-aislingí grámhara
Is breá liom gach nóiméad go daor
Is breá an rud é a ngrá ghlan
is mise mo domhan
Mo gach rud beag
Coinneoidh mé iad i mo chroí go deo agus i gcónaí
ón nóiméad a rugadh iad chuala mé na haingil ag canadh.
agus tú ag fás tá a fhios agam go bhfuil im anseo i gcónaí
Nuair a thagann sé chun caomhnóra tá a fhios agam nach bhfuil aon imní orm. Ná lig don domhan cuimilt síos ort
Ní féidir leat ach deora sona a chailliúint
Published 3rd Jul 2019
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3rd Jul 2019 7:41pm
Liam, I love it! Your love for your children is such a wonderful and deeply true picture, and it brings me hope that this world contains fathers like you. Thank you for making it known [love]. Thank you for allowing it to flow freely.
I love the way you created this in Irish, allowing the words to run across the tongue with a deep and honest taste.
Great weaving!
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Skye
I love the way you created this in Irish, allowing the words to run across the tongue with a deep and honest taste.
Great weaving!
ღ
Skye
4th Jul 2019 1:58am
Oh Liam, I only speak French, English, Haiti Creole, and broken Italian, I can only assume by Ms. Skyecebh comment of credibility it is a beautiful piece, worthy of its praise
4th Jul 2019 10:31am
i couldn't read it but judging by the comment made by SkyeCebh its a very beautiful piece about your children's big respect to you for sharing your love that truly embraces your heart as a father love of your children's
