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I…A BEAUTIFUL CHAOS: of melancholy+ rage+ ecstasy, & an endless string of such TRUTHFUL et ceteras
I know..you now at least feign to know & try hard to feel this...
you karmic shitloaded donkeying dumb braying aloud you worthless wordistic benthic cunt
you little frizzy draped & redly wrinkled poker-faced puppet of a so untiringly scribbling and
blabbering ever …so unruly rude & rustic rusted soul ..of a so-called poet?
I agelessly am born in and as you
puppeteeringly steering your crowning mundane greys in veils of delusionary layers after layers
all along the swimmed invisibly vacuuming mystical truths in nacreously bubbling rainbow illusions
until & beyond you will ever know....
I fatally spin your timeless spindles
of your draconianly non-laconic & gorgeously anti-gregarious truth slut that you are
you disgruntled bleeding red adamantine of a rebellious radicle versus lies & all vice
in no financially trickling scopeless debacle to soulless brokers, yet scripting frenetic
thunderbolts of sloganeered revolution in heart-graffitied tattoos of love & truth
It’s a cyclical destiny...this US the superimposable VICE VERSA …
when I breathe & beat & boom & bloom… as you as dreams as verses as melancholy
the sudden noonish rootedness you spread & grip over my stemmed pages reeling in
brimming emptiness of an atrociously dancing chaos struck & struck & much overwritten
in ballooned to cratered bursting out impromptu of a maddeningly rushing nothingness
where you know there is no right & wrong in the harnessing visage of what is finally felt
as filtered decoction ...of your trancing melancholy in the rippling essence of 'you me= us'
this destined divine artistry
Published 3rd Jul 2019
| Edited 5th Jul 2019
Author's Note
a try for "I ..Muse" comp.
*Its you its YOU i muse unendingly my love. You know xx
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*Its you its YOU i muse unendingly my love. You know xx
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2019 2:23pm
I love how this demonstrates how difficult it is to separate the muse for self. Without us, the muse withers...with the muse, we do. It's a symbiotic relationship that sometimes tortures both parties. Beautiful...Thank you so much for joining in with this piece :-)
thanks for the comp. & being here with kind words Ash..Your comp. & themes & efforts are quite laudable..& i have some inclination towrads ur comps. naturally & dunn know why ;) this is a fantastic comp & been reading all entries..hope i did some justice in bringing out the mused musing him forever in love :)
4th Jul 2019 00:32am
5th Jul 2019 8:29am
9th Jul 2019 1:13am
"I fatally spin your timeless spindles
of your draconianly non-laconic & gorgeously anti-gregarious truth slut that you are .. "
Unlock an introvert's dark vault and discover a Marushkya doll, each layer made of mirror. It's an addiction rush, when you push forward anyways, but that's push-pull on a Beowulf level from primitive days. Dissect the doctor and you lock yourself into her lair. The oldest bar seduction story ever told, but so seldom told. Binary stars making gold
It’s a cyclical destiny...this US the superimposable VICE VERSA …
We all default to the gestalt and as a result your hyper-receptive connection keeps the ribbons streaming. Live dreaming with a really smooth smoky jazz beat.
Do you have enough drive and connection left over for a collaboration?
of your draconianly non-laconic & gorgeously anti-gregarious truth slut that you are .. "
Unlock an introvert's dark vault and discover a Marushkya doll, each layer made of mirror. It's an addiction rush, when you push forward anyways, but that's push-pull on a Beowulf level from primitive days. Dissect the doctor and you lock yourself into her lair. The oldest bar seduction story ever told, but so seldom told. Binary stars making gold
It’s a cyclical destiny...this US the superimposable VICE VERSA …
We all default to the gestalt and as a result your hyper-receptive connection keeps the ribbons streaming. Live dreaming with a really smooth smoky jazz beat.
Do you have enough drive and connection left over for a collaboration?
smooth smoky jazz beat..i like that Loki..encapsulates the eternity.. truth of elevating motherly hazy chaos..of the inexplicable love holding cosmos... that in which encompasses all..even the (seeming) clarity & the so-egoistically demanding minded greys of deconstructions & logics...hyper receptiveness is a default to the super-consciousness soul as a micromacrocosmic droplet continuum in humbled SILENCE of a realizational response to the cosmos of hyperlogics ..one could just only feel & sync in this composure amidst all the chaos..Juz me Loki that your awakening words & deep feedback inspires...and saying of the collab, the depths you verse in the search is something i could never match. so will just adore your poetry.. but feels honored for the call adored poet..write on the journey & light :)
