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Gender Issues (Haikus 15.0)
1. Crying
the men who shed tears
are weak and not to be trusted
or so I was taught
2. Alcohol
the men who don't drink
are iffeminite fairies
or so I was taught
3. Fighting
the men who don't fight
are simply yellow cowards
or so I was taught
4. Reading
the men who read books
up their own arse, the need punched
or so I was taught
5. Writing
men who write poetry
take it in the ass or mouth
or so I was taught
6. Acting
men who are actors
all of them just kiddie fiddlers
or so I was taught
7. Abusing
men who abuse wives
are righteous punishing them
or so I was taught
8. Lying
monogamous men
are liars or under the thumb
or so I was taught
9. Stabbing
men who are the brave
will stab, slash and kill at will
or so I was taught
10. Attacking
men who are fearless
will attack without reason
or so I was taught
11. Slashing
Men who are hardest
carry an open razor
or so I was taught
12. Ignoring
the men who taught me
were completely fucking wrong
teaching was ignored
12. Seeing
the men who taught me
were evil and dishonest
I saw through their lies
13. Dogging
the men who taught me
told me I was the black sheep
I was the sheepdog
14. Opposing
the men who taught me
to do quite the opposite
to what I was taught
15. Shaming
take heed, and evolve
Most men are shite, penis led
my genders shame writ
Published 3rd Jul 2019
Author's Note
An attempted Glaswegian male upbringing in the 1960's/70's It failed because of a force of will and non-compliance. Men can change if they so chose
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3rd Jul 2019 11:22am
indeed they can Dave!
stellar expression(s). shows the man and the unyielding strength of his character.
unfortunately some choose never to become a man from a kid.
Maturity and wisdom every single line.
stellar expression(s). shows the man and the unyielding strength of his character.
unfortunately some choose never to become a man from a kid.
Maturity and wisdom every single line.
21st Jul 2019 9:21am
thank you, my friend, for your wise words. Most men stay belligerent kids all their life, it's in their nature but some choose to be different hopefully helping to encourage others. We have force of will to be anythng we want to be. All men can change if they wish
(((((((((( Hugs ))))))))))
(((((((((( Hugs ))))))))))
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2019 1:45pm
"the men who taught me
told me I was the black sheep
I was the sheepdog"
Amen to that! What a powerful statement, David! Sometimes what we're taught is absolute shite. We gotta relearn & do what feels right. As cold_fusion said above, some never evolve.
Fierce pouncing hugs!!! :-)
told me I was the black sheep
I was the sheepdog"
Amen to that! What a powerful statement, David! Sometimes what we're taught is absolute shite. We gotta relearn & do what feels right. As cold_fusion said above, some never evolve.
Fierce pouncing hugs!!! :-)
21st Jul 2019 9:27am
AT 19 I had the firm resolve to be modelled on my father and chose to be his polar opposite. Some people on DU remind me of my father because they chose to be like him, the ones who never forgive. That's why I will always stand against them.
thank you for your unwavering love and support, you are a gem :-)
(((((((((( Huge Hugs ))))))))))
thank you for your unwavering love and support, you are a gem :-)
(((((((((( Huge Hugs ))))))))))
3rd Jul 2019 10:47pm
I enjoy the bold perspectives you offer. Terrific message. I was telling Missy yesterday, Leonard Nimoy, a personal hero, was a champion of feminism his entire adult life. At the time of his passing, he was doing a real womens bodies photo shoot. We must have the courage to be ourselves and take action for the things we believe in.
More wise words from both you and Leonard Nimoy.
Thank you for being you :-)))))))))
Live Long and prosper
Thank you for being you :-)))))))))
Live Long and prosper
