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jimmy crack corn
exit route 99
survey your territory
we're going off-roading
into the badlands without a map
there is no turning back
so eyes ahead...
so many sights I want to show you
pack your big girl panties
this isn't for the faint-hearted
the devil crossed your path
you blew right through the crossroads
without even a look back
Jimmy crack corn is coming
he's in your near future...be wary
I called upon your sin
let it speak for you
whiskey lies will abort filth--
dripped from a forked tongue
like midnight ilk
take your time in the dark
but don't set up camp there
it's just a road to where you are heading
breathe lovely one and exhale poetry
in your depths
you will both lose and find yourself
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Re. jimmy crack corn
2nd Jul 2019 5:54pm
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3rd Jul 2019 00:17am
thank you beautiful Tim yes sigh nothing like the open road and freedom...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. jimmy crack corn
2nd Jul 2019 6:41pm
"I called you on your sin
let it speak for you
whiskey lies will abort filth--
dripped from a forked tongue
like midnight ilk"
Crims eating the spiritual corn...
love it
Jeff
let it speak for you
whiskey lies will abort filth--
dripped from a forked tongue
like midnight ilk"
Crims eating the spiritual corn...
love it
Jeff
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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 00:19am
thank you graciously dearest Jeff that was my favorite stanza here too...
you always bring me smiles with your visits...
love Brenda 🌹
you always bring me smiles with your visits...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. jimmy crack corn
2nd Jul 2019 6:49pm
Reminding me of Hwy 99 in California stirs up a plethera of memories for me.
Did You know that Willie Nelson owns a dive bar off of Hwy 99? I accidentally found it.
My 1st official duty station, Castle AFB, Atwater, CA, was just off of Hwy 99
Many a road trip for reasons and for no fucking reasons other than to go and go fast.....faster with the top down .........Food for many spilled ink, i think
Wonderful spill here, Brenda
Did You know that Willie Nelson owns a dive bar off of Hwy 99? I accidentally found it.
My 1st official duty station, Castle AFB, Atwater, CA, was just off of Hwy 99
Many a road trip for reasons and for no fucking reasons other than to go and go fast.....faster with the top down .........Food for many spilled ink, i think
Wonderful spill here, Brenda
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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 00:20am
thank you dearest Tallen yes highway 99 goes up and down Cali. what a coincidence you were stationed in Atwater I'm just up 99 from there...
I deeply appreciate you sharing your memories with me...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you sharing your memories with me...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 00:22am
thank you graciously dearest HF love your response... you gifted me smiles...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2019 8:10pm
It's like you've just embarked on a journey without a solid destination...you're in it for the ride & determined to see it through...come what may. Big girl panties in tow. Deep breath & hit the road! I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 00:23am
thank you beautiful Willow I'm unsure of where this write came from but it does speak to what lies ahead of me...I deeply appreciate your insight here...
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. jimmy crack corn
2nd Jul 2019 10:31pm
Idle hands are the devils worshop. Yet times in my mind i think hes opened shop. The world is full of demons some more notorious than others. Some are out and out blatant some pretend to be lovers. In the night is when we think of the wraiths that dwell butthey are more common in the day. They put on their best charms and swags when they come your way. So it doesnt matter if you set up camp or leave out in a car. Pay attention to your surroundings never settle for less than you are
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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 00:26am
thank you graciously dearest Liam for such a thoughtful comment I can tell you are a spiritual person...I struggle with the dark quite a bit and I offend some with my writing...my dark writes are some I would advise a lot of people not to read...you're a beautiful soul and I would never want to offend you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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3rd Jul 2019 00:35am
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3rd Jul 2019 00:41am
aw I'm glad dearest Liam thank you for sharing your deeper insights it helps shed light on a poem where without the other poet's poetry eyes might not dawn me 💕
Re. jimmy crack corn
2nd Jul 2019 10:46pm
Holy shite, goddess, at it again! What a beautiful warning here. I love it.
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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 00:27am
aw thank you beautiful Liv for such a lovely comment making me blush... I deeply appreciate you beautiful poetess...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2019 1:28am
Liked the piece...BUT...doesn't the song go "Jimmy Crack Corn and I don't care?" ? :-) The piece was well told!

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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 1:36am
thank you graciously dearest Skeets yes that's how the song goes giggles it's a an ex Jimmy of mine I referred to there he's been gone from my life and is trying to remerge he doesn't care lol...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 1:37am
thank you graciously beautiful poetess for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 2:17am
thank you graciously dearest Daddy for feeling my vibe and showing me love..I'm from Fresno I now live in Northern Cali...I love it here Yosemite is right up the way there is a spiritual vibe to every place but it's in the moutains or on the coast I feel it the most... I'm happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. jimmy crack corn
3rd Jul 2019 5:37pm
Another hell yeah from Pandy. Mmm, yes..the world is ready for you, but for once, I feel the world shows some promise to you. Congrats on this big leap, I feel your happiness exuding! 5 heart review! ❤❤❤❤❤
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3rd Jul 2019 11:58pm
thank you beautiful Pandora I love your response I believe I am ready to face my future...I go back and forth in confidence but it's still there underlying my emotions...
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹