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Music and sex
Music and sex are one in the same,
They can cause so much pleasure
but yet so much pain.
They can both rock your being
and leave your mind and heart fleeing.
Both are fantastic
but only one is orgasmic.
One will get you up and moving your feet
and one will leave you feeling anothers heartbeat.
They can leave one mistified
but can leave many satisfied.
Both can require a different pace
but both will leave you with a smile on your face.
Both will leave you breathless
and bring you so much happiness.
Music is great and sex is hot,
if you dont enjoy both of these
then for me, you are not!!
They can cause so much pleasure
but yet so much pain.
They can both rock your being
and leave your mind and heart fleeing.
Both are fantastic
but only one is orgasmic.
One will get you up and moving your feet
and one will leave you feeling anothers heartbeat.
They can leave one mistified
but can leave many satisfied.
Both can require a different pace
but both will leave you with a smile on your face.
Both will leave you breathless
and bring you so much happiness.
Music is great and sex is hot,
if you dont enjoy both of these
then for me, you are not!!
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nice
11th Dec 2011 5:50am
2 days -new....Welcome
12th Dec 2011 9:05am
Killer little piece.....as probably you are, too. I play guitar. Great Poem.....off to a very good start...nice. We may share the same style of writing......just an observation. Take Care.
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re: 2 days -new....Welcome
12th Dec 2011 9:25am
Thanks. Music is my first and one true love and I find myself writing about it a lot.
Hey...
Anonymous
12th Dec 2011 9:51am
Welcome to the DUP!
I think your piece is well written and provoking...Kudos
Al -x-
I think your piece is well written and provoking...Kudos
Al -x-
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jjjjjj
13th Dec 2011 6:10am
A good poem but maybe try to vary your sentence beginnings such as both and but. That would make it a stronger and more meaningful piece.
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re: jjjjjj
11th Feb 2012 8:12am
Thank u for bein honest and ur advice...will definitely take it into consideration and use it positively.
jus listen....
23rd Jan 2012 11:36pm
the grinding of the hips
stimulating those southern lips
with more heat than capacity filled club
to the beat of the pitter pat of feet running through the mud
& then the rhythm just takes control
with the invasion of Love into the Soul
& feminine moans create the harmony of bliss
so turn up the volume no man or woman can resist...
stimulating those southern lips
with more heat than capacity filled club
to the beat of the pitter pat of feet running through the mud
& then the rhythm just takes control
with the invasion of Love into the Soul
& feminine moans create the harmony of bliss
so turn up the volume no man or woman can resist...
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re: jus listen....
11th Feb 2012 6:40am
Good combo
9th May 2012 3:10am
The nice irony is so many songs have been written with sex on the brain! Great job!
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Re: Music and sex
25th Jan 2013 11:51pm