My Mind

Nice metre and flow on this dark write, very cool

Thank you, Carpe! For the read and comment :)

This was some deep well thought piece you put together I enjoyed it

Thank you, dearest yellowbone! For the read and feedback, I really appreciate it❤️

Wonderful write .....

Thank you, AP :) for the read, of course and the comment❤️

Love the way you cleverly use those deserted spots to create an visual image for the reader. There's some lovely lines of rhyme in this poem:)

Ah, thank you so much, Miss_Blue, I really appreciate the read and kind comment❤️

Some of the most beautiful souls I know have serious legions of demons in tow. It's the contrast that creates the textures & depths. Your stark imagery set against the way you almost lovingly refer to your demons makes for a very intriguing piece. My demons & I will stick around & see what else ya got.   :-)

If you can’t beat em, join em? ;P Thank you, dearest Willow, for reading my spill and leaving this feedback❤️

The mind is a delicate place and with many doors that we would rather not open too many times.

Tim! I was actually thinking about that while writing this, just another way to say all of this. I love you interpreted it that way :) as always, thank you so much for the read and comment❤️

You spill here conjured up a lot of different memories in my past.
I was in a padded room once only it was super white and bright -- i hated it as i've always loved darkness

I loved the tempo to this ink and each dark description
haunting spill

Thank you, Tallen❤️ Yes, a padded room is nowhere anyone would want to be in my opinion. I too love the dark. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

I really connected with this fine poem, beautifully constructed, all sounds very familiar, a mind broken is broken forever, sadly. Love fixes much of the damage but the hauntings of the mind continue it is just to a lesser extent. The worst combination is a broken mind and a broken heart - I love the way you write :-)

excellent Ink - ease RL add :-)

Honestly David, you honor me too often with the RL adds! But I’m grateful for the love, nonetheless. I’m so glad you connected with it and that my writing can do that for someone. Thank you for the read, the kind comment and the RL add❤️

Wow!... You are great, LivDiane (Liv Diane).
Congratulations !
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Thank you, Marks! For the read and comment. Liv is fine ;)

You're welcome.

I like the darkness within this poem.  Let the demonic spirits free to write some more.

Peace, love and empathy.

Thank you, Harvey; they do need to roam free! Thank you for the read and the comment :)