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yes, he was leaving
she pressed her hand to her lips
and blew him a kiss
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jemac
Published
26th Jun 2019
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Josh
(Joshua Bond)
27th Jun 2019 12:29pm
Beautifully sensed experience penned into a simple momentary image.
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jemac
28th Jun 2019 00:47am
Thank you so much Josh .. for your beautiful comments .. greatly appreciated
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DanielChristensen
(The Fire Elemental)
28th Jun 2019 5:57pm
Succinct and yet poignant can be a difficult marriage, yet this one scene of parting, saturated with subtle emotion, is wonderful to absorb. Grateful to Josh for pointing you out. Hello, I'm Daniel. It's nice to meet you.
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jemac
29th Jun 2019 2:51am
Thank you so much Daniel for your wonderful comments .. greatly appreciated .. I am JeJe, nice to meet you as well ..
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