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our soul fractals in fusion
my vital serosa
in fluidic & freefalling dreaminess
patinated of unformatted flaccidities
are amoebically flexing figments …transmuting
as shrinking microbe across passing pointed porosities
to gigantic mystical bird flapping as enlarged eternities
in swimmed flights across the abstracting
skies, in uproariously gushing jetstreams
unceasingly singing as scriptless language
yet your orthodoxically frozen
adventitious ligamenting athletic rigidities
are armours deeply alloying with~ within
(s)melting molten flown holy vermilion
in eternal firing sublimities
-our fusing third eye
Written by
summultima
(uma)
Published 24th Jun 2019
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Re. our soul fractals in fusion
24th Jun 2019 1:01pm
This is so thick and lovely, Uma. It's akin to stepping off the plane in India, with the air heavy with spice and a knowing where you are in the world.
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Re: Re. our soul fractals in fusion
Thank you dear friend & adored Poetess...yes, had taken some subtle clues from the historical religious epic of Mahabharata ..the Karna Kavacha Kundala..to fuse with the spiritual theme of devouted love I trance in the verses...the spice routed abode of the orient welcomes you in all its aromatically divine soul palette it offers in the deeply rooted spiritual offering dear :) xx
Re. our soul fractals in fusion
24th Jun 2019 1:09pm
Wow this is extraordinary diction, sublime poetic muse indeed. If you could explain it I should be sure what's it all about. Kudos.
Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too, I like to know of human thoughts from all sections of the globe, coz such interaction is good for all, they say
Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too, I like to know of human thoughts from all sections of the globe, coz such interaction is good for all, they say
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Re: Re. our soul fractals in fusion
24th Jun 2019 9:52pm
Aw Zaynab Poetess.. thanks for commenting & let's leave the explaining part as such..cos feels poetry is open-ended & perceived by eyes n souls in hues of their innateness ..poetry in spite of being so personal but presented as ways of metaphors or whatever layers or no layers...poetic appeal is boundless & let be so beautifully chaotic ..mimicking life & love & truths ...jus me in blabbers or what poetry is to me perhaps..Thank you for gracing the page & hope to read you more :)
Re. our soul fractals in fusion
24th Jun 2019 1:30pm
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24th Jun 2019 9:54pm
Re. our soul fractals in fusion
24th Jun 2019 7:09pm
I've never been to India - except via your poems. If I do ever go, I'll be well prepared :))
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Re: Re. our soul fractals in fusion
24th Jun 2019 9:56pm
Thanks dear Josh adored Poet..glad you feel the essence & spice of India in the verses ..& yes hope you do visit our soulful abode soonest with the preps :))
Re. our soul fractals in fusion
25th Jun 2019 4:20am
I read of you and in in fragments my soul carries..
absolutely a lovely mind and spirit
absolutely a lovely mind and spirit
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Re: Re. our soul fractals in fusion
25th Jun 2019 4:31am
Adored dear poetess & soul...humbled & ever love your presence & the lightedness you shower..
Light & Love xx
Light & Love xx
Re. our soul fractals in fusion
25th Jun 2019 4:35am
I read it multiple times dear Uma and i must say each time i walked away thinking that there's something bigger than us, bigger than this universe which ties us and and mysterious energies around us to one, in perfect harmony which is beyond our mortal minds to understand and comprehend.
Needless to say your language in your poetry is extraordinary, and the way you channel to the deeper understandings is a gift and one that you should be very proud.
Needless to say your language in your poetry is extraordinary, and the way you channel to the deeper understandings is a gift and one that you should be very proud.
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Re: Re. our soul fractals in fusion
25th Jun 2019 4:54am
Layla, coming from you my ever foremost DU poet adored & friend & soulful One, I treasure your wise words & light you shower on the presence reads...humbled! Yes, there s the bigger hyperlogic that which is spread as the micromacro cosmic spreadsheet ..as each droplets in us & as a whole how it functions is this Supreme subconciuosness & our lighted conscious minds..our eternal souls know feel all from its depths ,,& yet the greying mind asks for the logics & dissections .Poetry is what our soul blabbers I feel ..mind plays here & der too..just me :)
Forever mesmerized in your poetic sensibilities & soulful flow you flow Layla...keep writing shing your depths dear ..hope you have a fab day ahead <3 xx
Forever mesmerized in your poetic sensibilities & soulful flow you flow Layla...keep writing shing your depths dear ..hope you have a fab day ahead <3 xx
Re. our soul fractals in fusion
Anonymous
25th Jun 2019 1:30pm
your soul never stops singing, in all grey chorus to beauty verse......
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Re: Re. our soul fractals in fusion
3rd Jul 2019 4:37am
Re. our soul fractals in fusion
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2019 4:36am
Powerful words.
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3rd Jul 2019 4:38am
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2019 4:41am
YW
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