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GanGstA CoDe....
she likes my Gangsta
i love her thug
she a constant thinker
....with a lack of trust..
she know Gangsta code
my wills and all my wont's
quick to call a nicca out on the law
and at times ur boy be fuckin up..
see code be everythang
to walk the line is to succeed
whether playing life L7 square
or crocked and twisted as a tumble weed
the code of LOVE speaks for itself
the code of LIFE speaks through every breath
the code of LOYALTY thats the test..
one bridged between thoughtful and complete selfishness
the code of KNOWLEDGE be the building blocks
the code of WISDOM be mortar to lock set blocks
the code of UNDERSTANDING be KEY..
got me where i am and who i love to be...
i love her thug
she a constant thinker
....with a lack of trust..
she know Gangsta code
my wills and all my wont's
quick to call a nicca out on the law
and at times ur boy be fuckin up..
see code be everythang
to walk the line is to succeed
whether playing life L7 square
or crocked and twisted as a tumble weed
the code of LOVE speaks for itself
the code of LIFE speaks through every breath
the code of LOYALTY thats the test..
one bridged between thoughtful and complete selfishness
the code of KNOWLEDGE be the building blocks
the code of WISDOM be mortar to lock set blocks
the code of UNDERSTANDING be KEY..
got me where i am and who i love to be...
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This is deep!
9th Dec 2011 5:50am
I don't know which one i like better.......the poem or the picture! This is such a beautiful combination. I really enjoyed reading this write! Awesome! :)
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re: This is deep!
9th Dec 2011 5:29pm
tymv.. ChocoDrop.. the wife and i are all teeth and cheeks.. she is the talented hand behind all the pics i post.. amazing to me.. y i am her biggest fan.. so now u know who i write and wa i write about be no fantasy.. my better half simply makes it easy fa me..
thanks for stopping by and giving wifey and i such a compliment.. means a lot coming from u.. 8^/ Peppz..
thanks for stopping by and giving wifey and i such a compliment.. means a lot coming from u.. 8^/ Peppz..
Best of both
Anonymous
9th Dec 2011 6:35pm
Hey Peppz. This one's a bit special. You're working with your two strongest suits (Pops and the missus) and you're mixing the dark and the light like only you can.
I'm offering you an edit for your consideration/amusement. I've taken out a few little bits that didn't quite work for THIS reader and added in just one or two small (hopefully subtle)rhymes to integrate it a bit more.
Most important, my ending brings the spotlight back on your missus. The poem started off being about her and how important her knowing about the code (and you) is in the great scheme of things. Just felt it should wind up with her in focus. Popps won't mind this one time!
she likes my Gangsta
i love her thug
she a constant thinker....
she know Gangsta code
my wills and all my wont's
quick to call a nicca out on the law
(and at times ur boy be fuckin up fa sure..)
see
da code be EVERYthang
to walk the line is to succeed
whether playing life L7(?) square
or croOked and twisted as a tumble weed
the code of LOVE speaks for itself
the code of LIFE speaks through every breath
the code of LOYALTY ....thats the test.
one bridged between thoughtful and complete selfishness
the code of KNOWLEDGE be the building blocks
the code of WISDOM be mortar to lock set blocks
the code of UNDERSTANDING be KEY..
Ma lil' gangsta taught these things
this code
to me
I'm offering you an edit for your consideration/amusement. I've taken out a few little bits that didn't quite work for THIS reader and added in just one or two small (hopefully subtle)rhymes to integrate it a bit more.
Most important, my ending brings the spotlight back on your missus. The poem started off being about her and how important her knowing about the code (and you) is in the great scheme of things. Just felt it should wind up with her in focus. Popps won't mind this one time!
she likes my Gangsta
i love her thug
she a constant thinker....
she know Gangsta code
my wills and all my wont's
quick to call a nicca out on the law
(and at times ur boy be fuckin up fa sure..)
see
da code be EVERYthang
to walk the line is to succeed
whether playing life L7(?) square
or croOked and twisted as a tumble weed
the code of LOVE speaks for itself
the code of LIFE speaks through every breath
the code of LOYALTY ....thats the test.
one bridged between thoughtful and complete selfishness
the code of KNOWLEDGE be the building blocks
the code of WISDOM be mortar to lock set blocks
the code of UNDERSTANDING be KEY..
Ma lil' gangsta taught these things
this code
to me
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re: Best of both
9th Dec 2011 8:38pm
my dear Brother... i have lived so long by this code that i need not have to think about it.. it is the center piece of my balance.. the cornerstone of my mental temple.. she learned the law through me as i learn and have been crafted by He..
you left out an important line.. '...with a lack of trust..' this is important because as mine's view and im sure many others.. 'men are dogs and will fuck up if given air and opportunity..' lmao.. sad truth but wa man can hold a straight face and not at the very least give the point some merit..
reason being code is everything.. (if not in tune with Father) mathematically balanced for success.. creates level playing field.. (TRUST) to walk the line one prospers.. begin to create own rules.. guarantees the loss of balance..
that being said my GOOMS Grand Master.. now would not be the time to elevate a woman to a place of teaching us men the rules of life.. believe its enough that Papa placed them with us to regulate handling of set rules.. smdh.. however the case.. i appreciate all that u have to say and ur attempt at making a woman's head ever bigger than wa it already is.. hahahah... bro 8^/ Reddzz..
PS.. L7 = American finger jester for calling someone a square.. goodie two shoes..
you left out an important line.. '...with a lack of trust..' this is important because as mine's view and im sure many others.. 'men are dogs and will fuck up if given air and opportunity..' lmao.. sad truth but wa man can hold a straight face and not at the very least give the point some merit..
reason being code is everything.. (if not in tune with Father) mathematically balanced for success.. creates level playing field.. (TRUST) to walk the line one prospers.. begin to create own rules.. guarantees the loss of balance..
that being said my GOOMS Grand Master.. now would not be the time to elevate a woman to a place of teaching us men the rules of life.. believe its enough that Papa placed them with us to regulate handling of set rules.. smdh.. however the case.. i appreciate all that u have to say and ur attempt at making a woman's head ever bigger than wa it already is.. hahahah... bro 8^/ Reddzz..
PS.. L7 = American finger jester for calling someone a square.. goodie two shoes..
Getting it wrong
Anonymous
9th Dec 2011 9:20pm
Apologies Bro. I spoke out of turn and now that you explain the exact nature of the 'code' I see that your missus is indeed an accessory AFTER the fact and my suggestions inappropriate. Not even GOOMS has any say here. Peace Bro. Redzz
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24th Jun 2013 9:18pm
...ty Poet402.. glad you enjoyed.. plz do come back and visit again sometime.. 8^/ Red
..and welcome to the DU
..and welcome to the DU
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3rd Dec 2013 3:00pm
...i am glad you were able to enjoy JPdapoet.. thanks for the compliment and please do stop by again some time.. 8^/ Red
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4th Dec 2013 11:20am
That was a good performance.
Wish I could have been there, would have laughed my ass off. :D
Wish I could have been there, would have laughed my ass off. :D
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re: Re: GanGstA CoDe....
5th Dec 2013 12:51pm
...yes Allen... we had much fun at this performance.. glad you could share in some of the experience.. thanks for the compliment. please do stop by again some time.. 8^/ Red
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