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Fernweh
"We have not forgotten"
Our promised return—
eternal recurrence: fernweh
this longed-for place
of gravitational deliverance
within each Soul's desire
for Source Energy
Spiritual evolution spiraling
through lifetimes, emerging
true colors arising
from an infinite storm of beauty—
Empathy, Compassion, Joy
worldly respect, elemental care:
Earth, Water, Fire, Air—
transcendent interconnectedness
attaining perfect balance:
sacrosanct reverence
helixed homing device
three-dimensional structure
double-stranded DNA—
your human trajectory course
unraveling mystery
as previous lives
recall each minute
by soft memory
and Love's fingertip:
galaxies in the mix
vibrational formation aligning—
scintillating wonder, spherical rotations;
a Universal Vortex constantly Creating:
déjà vu, sacred contracts
flash-forwarded experience—
yesteryears revisited today
tomorrow, always. . .
choosing, rechoosing —
until synchronicity levels
Earth's playing fields
loving intent growing forward
co-creating circumstance
beholding ancient prophecy fulfilled
through completed works
of blessings and light:
Rainbow Warriors, united
abolishing conflicts, establishing
respites among turbulent spirits
See, wasn't us who forgot
your capacity to evolve
into pure Love;
no; it was You—
~
Our promised return—
eternal recurrence: fernweh
this longed-for place
of gravitational deliverance
within each Soul's desire
for Source Energy
Spiritual evolution spiraling
through lifetimes, emerging
true colors arising
from an infinite storm of beauty—
Empathy, Compassion, Joy
worldly respect, elemental care:
Earth, Water, Fire, Air—
transcendent interconnectedness
attaining perfect balance:
sacrosanct reverence
helixed homing device
three-dimensional structure
double-stranded DNA—
your human trajectory course
unraveling mystery
as previous lives
recall each minute
by soft memory
and Love's fingertip:
galaxies in the mix
vibrational formation aligning—
scintillating wonder, spherical rotations;
a Universal Vortex constantly Creating:
déjà vu, sacred contracts
flash-forwarded experience—
yesteryears revisited today
tomorrow, always. . .
choosing, rechoosing —
until synchronicity levels
Earth's playing fields
loving intent growing forward
co-creating circumstance
beholding ancient prophecy fulfilled
through completed works
of blessings and light:
Rainbow Warriors, united
abolishing conflicts, establishing
respites among turbulent spirits
See, wasn't us who forgot
your capacity to evolve
into pure Love;
no; it was You—
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 18th Jun 2019
| Edited 25th Jul 2019
Author's Note
Words 148 / Unique 148 ( discipline check )
For Melia's Rainbow Prophecy Competition: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10792/
For Melia's Rainbow Prophecy Competition: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10792/
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Re. Fernweh
18th Jun 2019 2:03am
*struck by the ecstasy, fallen to her hands & knees, crawling slowly...*
Oh Sage oh Sage, I knew you would I just knew...
I have to make room, I will, and I’ll be back one day, omg, we’re not worthy.
🐯
🙏🏻
Oh Sage oh Sage, I knew you would I just knew...
I have to make room, I will, and I’ll be back one day, omg, we’re not worthy.
🐯
🙏🏻
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Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:25pm
Re. Fernweh
18th Jun 2019 2:11am
This has a prophetic voice, it goes beyond the usual symbolism of harmony, wish fulfillment, and acceptance that would be associated with rainbows, and it goes even deeper than chakra colors, it goes to a place where colors unwind into their very origins and remember their very creation, excellent entry that is mind- expanding..
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Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:26pm
Thank you, PR. I channeled this so that you picked up on that means a lot. We are not alone on this floating blue orb. Thank you also for the RL honor.
Re: Re. Fernweh
26th Jul 2019 2:24am
I just listened to the audio, your reading voice reminds me of Sharon Olds :)
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Re. Fernweh
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2019 10:25am
18th Jun 2019 2:26am
WOW
I am blown away by this not having a single repeated word.
Color me speechless as a rainbow.
Except I will say the ending was exceptional. It flipped the narrative script on the reader so to speak.
Now, given the limitations of unique wordness, you chose your words very well. The "er" and "ire along with short and long "i" assonance in these stanzas is especially noteworthy.
" Our promised return—
eternal recurrence: fernweh
this longed-for place;
gravitational deliverance
within each Soul's desire
Spiritual evolution spiraling
through lifetimes, emerging
true colors arising
from an infinite storm of beauty—"
❤📝
I am blown away by this not having a single repeated word.
Color me speechless as a rainbow.
Except I will say the ending was exceptional. It flipped the narrative script on the reader so to speak.
Now, given the limitations of unique wordness, you chose your words very well. The "er" and "ire along with short and long "i" assonance in these stanzas is especially noteworthy.
" Our promised return—
eternal recurrence: fernweh
this longed-for place;
gravitational deliverance
within each Soul's desire
Spiritual evolution spiraling
through lifetimes, emerging
true colors arising
from an infinite storm of beauty—"
❤📝
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Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:28pm
Thank you as always for your love and support of my efforts. I appreciate you more than you know. I do need to periodically exercise that repetitive word demon for discipline. ❤📝
Re. Fernweh
Anonymous
18th Jun 2019 11:45am
Oooooh, congrats on placing in the Rainbow comp. 📝❤🌈
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Re. Fernweh
18th Jun 2019 7:50pm
taking one to its own scintillating base n basis of the pureform self ..self that is wholly in realizational of dimensions of origin evolution & beyond...its as if a dire reminder NOW just now .. of the miraculaous self in love-laden purity. Your understanding & wisdom & poetics is infinite as the flow you flow here, Wise one..Amazing!
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Re: Re. Fernweh
Thank you, Uma. Sometimes all it takes is to surrender to something greater in order for something beyond yourself to be born. I appreciate you and the RL honor.
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
18th Jun 2019 10:43pm
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Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:31pm
Re. Fernweh
19th Jun 2019 12:09pm
This is poetry at its best, we've clearly haven't forgotten.....
See, wasn't us who forgot
your capacity to evolve
into pure Love;
Now that stole my heart
See, wasn't us who forgot
your capacity to evolve
into pure Love;
Now that stole my heart
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Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:31pm
Re. Fernweh
20th Jun 2019 3:42pm
Beautiful !...
"a Universal Vortex constantly Creating:... "
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... a Universal Vortex constantly Creating... poets !
...💜❤️👍
"a Universal Vortex constantly Creating:... "
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... a Universal Vortex constantly Creating... poets !
...💜❤️👍
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Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:32pm
Re. Fernweh
21st Jun 2019 8:39pm
Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 9:29am
Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:32pm
Re. Fernweh
Anonymous
25th Jul 2019 12:02pm
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Re: Re. Fernweh
Ahhhhh Sky, that is how I felt when channeling this. I never finished composing it in time for the comp - but I have vowed to tie up loose ends regarding recordings and unfinished poems by summer's end!
Thank you for verifying we are not alone in that yearning. xo
Thank you for verifying we are not alone in that yearning. xo
Re. Fernweh
Anonymous
25th Jul 2019 7:44pm
Now I just want to play it on a loop. ❤🎤📝
Don't forget those revisions! 😉
Don't forget those revisions! 😉
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Re: Re. Fernweh
25th Jul 2019 8:33pm
Re: Re. Fernweh
Anonymous
25th Jul 2019 9:11pm
* cracks the leather critique whip * ❤📝
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Re. Fernweh
26th Jul 2019 9:34am
Beautiful! This flows as stars burning out and yet keeps giving. I adore the cut of gentility at the end. Easy RL.
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Re: Re. Fernweh
26th Jul 2019 11:50am
Re. Fernweh
1st Aug 2019 7:26pm
And I’ve finally watched & listened to the video - a total moving experience of the senses, Sage.
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