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Snow
Oh Shimmer
in a delicate
descent
your elegance
bewilders me
in magical amusement
to watch
Your patterned
dance fall
against skies of
ash
as you touch
skin to melt
into warmth
in a delicate
descent
your elegance
bewilders me
in magical amusement
to watch
Your patterned
dance fall
against skies of
ash
as you touch
skin to melt
into warmth
Published 16th Jun 2019
| Edited 17th Jun 2019
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16th Jun 2019 11:45pm
We Poets can sometimes write too much...this is a beautiful peace of poetry that proves what can be said with a few well chosen words. Bravo!!!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
17th Jun 2019 00:04am
Thanks for your comment. At times beauty cannot be expressed by words, but I do want to record those moments and thus poems such as these. I appreciate your statement and thanks for reading!
