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Up On The Bed
I knelt up on the bed and almost gasped
To feel you pull your hard cock from my sex;
And, then, you pushed the head against my arse:
Where I was virgin, you were going next!
But you said nothing as you pushed and pressed;
I knelt up on the bed and almost gasped
When you slid in and found my hanging breasts
(During your penetration), fun to grasp;
And then your pace increased - it became fast,
Once you pushed my head down and pulled my hair;
I knelt up on the bed and almost gasped
As soreness made me tearful - did you care?
No, not one bit of it: you liked it rough;
And wanted to fuck more, until at last,
You filled my backside with your viscous stuff;
I knelt up on the bed and almost gasped...
To feel you pull your hard cock from my sex;
And, then, you pushed the head against my arse:
Where I was virgin, you were going next!
But you said nothing as you pushed and pressed;
I knelt up on the bed and almost gasped
When you slid in and found my hanging breasts
(During your penetration), fun to grasp;
And then your pace increased - it became fast,
Once you pushed my head down and pulled my hair;
I knelt up on the bed and almost gasped
As soreness made me tearful - did you care?
No, not one bit of it: you liked it rough;
And wanted to fuck more, until at last,
You filled my backside with your viscous stuff;
I knelt up on the bed and almost gasped...
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Re. Up On The Bed
15th Jun 2019 11:47am
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15th Jun 2019 11:49am
sleep well and don't dream
dirty devils debauching
derrieres dreadfully...
dirty devils debauching
derrieres dreadfully...
Re. Up On The Bed
15th Jun 2019 1:23pm
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15th Jun 2019 1:39pm
Re. Up On The Bed
This poem went from incredibly hot to intensely sad. As he moved to fill his desire to overtake you with his power, he simultaneously took away your power. That’s how it read to me & I really liked this poem.
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16th Jun 2019 9:38am
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16th Jun 2019 9:42pm
Re. Up On The Bed
15th Jun 2019 3:12pm
Trul compounding feelings your artistry of words but the overpower and violation to leave one in pain no remorse is mind boggling to me
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16th Jun 2019 9:40am
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16th Jun 2019 9:55pm
I suppose it all depends on one’s perspective. I can see how the idea of questionably
Consensual anal sex can be hot, as the idea of raping or being raped can be erotic. This is a perfect outlet for those fantasies because no woman I know would ever want to be touched or penetrated in any way that causes pain or makes her feel less powerful. Sorry- just felt the need to point out what should be obvious. Our imaginations are power and we can convince ourselves others want things they don’t. We can hurt others deeply without intending to if we don’t think about these things beforehand. Much love XX
Consensual anal sex can be hot, as the idea of raping or being raped can be erotic. This is a perfect outlet for those fantasies because no woman I know would ever want to be touched or penetrated in any way that causes pain or makes her feel less powerful. Sorry- just felt the need to point out what should be obvious. Our imaginations are power and we can convince ourselves others want things they don’t. We can hurt others deeply without intending to if we don’t think about these things beforehand. Much love XX
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16th Jun 2019 11:38pm
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15th Jun 2019 6:07pm
Selfish lover captured from your view. Like having a beautiful flower and instead of admiring and nurturing; pulling the petals off. Your writing describes the erotic and deplorable of this interlude.
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16th Jun 2019 9:42am
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15th Jun 2019 7:06pm
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