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This face of mine,
Pock marked, scarred,
Wrinkled and worn-
So much life.
So much life!
Wrinkled and worn,
Pock marked, scarred-
This face of mine.
Pock marked, scarred,
Wrinkled and worn-
So much life.
So much life!
Wrinkled and worn,
Pock marked, scarred-
This face of mine.
Published 14th Jun 2019
Author's Note
This is more about perspective than my physical features.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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14th Jun 2019 8:12pm
A very sad palindrome, Sara. Some of the most beautiful people I know are covered in wrinkles and scars - it's the heart that makes one beautiful, afterall.
15th Jun 2019 6:27am
I love this! The reversal of lines turns it from sad and tired to triumphant and loving, in my mind. Very clever!
20th Aug 2020 8:20pm
