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In This Life
sometimes i feel
nostalgic tendencies towards eras
long before my time
sometimes i dream
of faces
which my eyes have never met
sometimes i think
i may have lived a thousand lives
before this one
always i hope
i got to spend them all
with you
nostalgic tendencies towards eras
long before my time
sometimes i dream
of faces
which my eyes have never met
sometimes i think
i may have lived a thousand lives
before this one
always i hope
i got to spend them all
with you
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Re: Re. In This Life
12th Jun 2019 1:34pm
I am so happy I could cry (happy tears) ! This is a poem that has been with me for years, and has been changed a lot of times until this time I decided that I would submit it like it is- and that would be it.
I am glad you felt what I feel every time I read this. It just warms and lightens the heart. :-)
Thank you, HF. (I say that even more)
I am glad you felt what I feel every time I read this. It just warms and lightens the heart. :-)
Thank you, HF. (I say that even more)
Re. In This Life
Anonymous
12th Jun 2019 2:58pm
This is so pretty in its sentiment. I think it’s simplicity is its beauty. Thank you for sharing this.
-M
-M
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Re: Re. In This Life
13th Jun 2019 7:38am
No, thank you for your comment, M. I am really happy that you liked this poem as much as you did. It is my pleasure.
Delanee.
Delanee.
Re. In This Life
12th Jun 2019 3:07pm
The poem reminds me that true soul-mates transcend time, and may have journeyed together through many past lifetimes, learning life's lessons sometimes together, sometimes separately. {If this theme of 'twin souls' is of interest to you, you might enjoy reading "Twin Souls: finding your true spiritual partner" by Patricia Joudry & Maurie Pressman}.
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Re: Re. In This Life
13th Jun 2019 7:39am
Thank you for the tip, Josh. I might look into that someday (when I find the time haha). It is a really interesting concept, isn't it?
Delanee.
Delanee.
Re. In This Life
13th Jun 2019 7:42am
beautiful Delanee I often feel like I was in Vietnam
I was born in 1969 I feel like my soul exited this place
and entered this one...
loving ending sentiment on a very thought provoking write...
love Brenda 🌹
I was born in 1969 I feel like my soul exited this place
and entered this one...
loving ending sentiment on a very thought provoking write...
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. In This Life
13th Jun 2019 8:32am
Thank you so much, Brenda. I am so happy that it made you think of certain things and that you liked reading this little poem of mine. :-)
What a lovely comment… Who knows, it might just be that way?
Delanee.
What a lovely comment… Who knows, it might just be that way?
Delanee.
Re. In This Life
13th Jun 2019 7:48am
Simply beautiful, the build-up to the last line is awesome, the last line is perfect :-)))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. In This Life
13th Jun 2019 8:33am
Thank you very much, David. For you to give such a compliment really means a lot to me! :-) So glad you enjoyed this read.
Delanee.
Delanee.
Re. In This Life
17th Jun 2019 5:08pm
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18th Jun 2019 7:51am
Re. In This Life
19th Jun 2019 9:13pm
I am totally on board with the concepts of souls remembering snippets of past lives in the present, and the idea that soul mates can and often do come together in more than one timeline/lifetime. Makes total sense to me. Stunningly gorgeous.
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Re: Re. In This Life
19th Jun 2019 9:15pm
I knew you would agree. Thank you for this lovely comment, dear Silence. It means the world to me.