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As We Lay Together
The eloquence of a mouth
forming words
to envelope
stirred reactions
conducting the throb
in the confines
of concentrated efforts
preparing a meal
from the weakness of desire
The evolution of arousal
coaxed to travel
where it all connects
so many have missed
but some seek
grand central
above the divide
that sacred bundle
a morsel of nirvana
engaged
with tender care.
forming words
to envelope
stirred reactions
conducting the throb
in the confines
of concentrated efforts
preparing a meal
from the weakness of desire
The evolution of arousal
coaxed to travel
where it all connects
so many have missed
but some seek
grand central
above the divide
that sacred bundle
a morsel of nirvana
engaged
with tender care.
Published 12th Jun 2019
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12th Jun 2019 4:29am
Such tender words your heart tend to weave, an imaginative clandestine affair for the mind to relish, feel, accept, this is very emotional and engaging, my type of liking handsome one
12th Jun 2019 12:51pm
You spotted the slow, tender brush strokes I attempted for the comp. Not sure if I succeeded, but to warrant such a lovely comment will do.
12th Jun 2019 3:46pm
You hit my g-spot mark with precision and such tender accuracy... wink, enjoy your day love
12th Jun 2019 6:45pm
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12th Jun 2019 6:36am
“but some seek
grand central
above the divide
that sacred bundle
a morsel of nirvana
engaged
with tender care...”
Mmm. Bliss ! This, is so gorgeous; in all its entirety.
An awesome write, Tenderloin... 🌻
grand central
above the divide
that sacred bundle
a morsel of nirvana
engaged
with tender care...”
Mmm. Bliss ! This, is so gorgeous; in all its entirety.
An awesome write, Tenderloin... 🌻
12th Jun 2019 12:48pm
12th Jun 2019 6:54pm
13th Jun 2019 9:45pm
Thank you for your epic contribution, T! You definitely created a vivid image & the whole piece being a metaphor " eloquence of a mouth
forming words "
"and...above the divide
that sacred bundle
a morsel of nirvana
engaged
with tender care. "
.....juicy words & a great depiction!
forming words "
"and...above the divide
that sacred bundle
a morsel of nirvana
engaged
with tender care. "
.....juicy words & a great depiction!
14th Jun 2019 4:18am
I haven't participated in a comp in some time and I had a spare moment. It all came from that first line. Thanks for the challenge.
15th Jun 2019 6:09pm
