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that i might sip
my cup runs over
with the fullness of her
hot chocolate flavour.
with a delicate stir
she bubbles upward
like a fountain of mist
fragrantly raptured
with a hope to be kissed.
let me embrace her
ere her warmth i may sense.
soon i must taste her
for a want so intense
puckers my spirit
to inhale her perfume.
crossing my limit
i am wont to presume
that i might sip her
ere my lips might indulge
secrets far sweeter
than wine words could divulge.
she breathes upon me
her relaxant bouquet
deep-throated glory
shall attend me all day,
© Copyright 2019 February 25
by Clyve A. Bowen
with the fullness of her
hot chocolate flavour.
with a delicate stir
she bubbles upward
like a fountain of mist
fragrantly raptured
with a hope to be kissed.
let me embrace her
ere her warmth i may sense.
soon i must taste her
for a want so intense
puckers my spirit
to inhale her perfume.
crossing my limit
i am wont to presume
that i might sip her
ere my lips might indulge
secrets far sweeter
than wine words could divulge.
she breathes upon me
her relaxant bouquet
deep-throated glory
shall attend me all day,
© Copyright 2019 February 25
by Clyve A. Bowen
Published 11th Jun 2019
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
11th Jun 2019 8:07pm
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12th Jun 2019 3:32am
Thank you, HF.
Your keen discernment has led you to the mini poems within the host poem. Your metaphorical analysis captures the essence of the taste sensations.
Your RL inclusion honours me, sweetening the cup.
Sincerely
cab
Your keen discernment has led you to the mini poems within the host poem. Your metaphorical analysis captures the essence of the taste sensations.
Your RL inclusion honours me, sweetening the cup.
Sincerely
cab
11th Jun 2019 11:54pm
“my cup runs over
with the fullness of her
hot chocolate flavour.
with a delicate stir...”
A cup that runs over is a cup well worth sipping upon !
A fine write, Cabcool... 🌻
with the fullness of her
hot chocolate flavour.
with a delicate stir...”
A cup that runs over is a cup well worth sipping upon !
A fine write, Cabcool... 🌻
12th Jun 2019 3:45am
Thank you, shadow_starzzz.
Perhaps "I'm drinking from my saucer," as the gospel song goes.
I appreciate your taking the time to share your feedback.
Sincerely
cab
Perhaps "I'm drinking from my saucer," as the gospel song goes.
I appreciate your taking the time to share your feedback.
Sincerely
cab
