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My Hands... (journal)
JOURNAL 11/25/11 2:15am
Having one of those moments....
looking at my hands and they are lonely...
they only know ME!, It has been too long....
I think I have lovely hands
but nothing to do with them but ME!
They type my craziness and my loneliness
and they are "my care taker", they are so good to me
They write my words, they make me wet,
They wipe my tears, they make me wet....
I feel bad for them,
they have too much responsibility....
I need for someone to hold them....
I am out... Sad...
Having one of those moments....
looking at my hands and they are lonely...
they only know ME!, It has been too long....
I think I have lovely hands
but nothing to do with them but ME!
They type my craziness and my loneliness
and they are "my care taker", they are so good to me
They write my words, they make me wet,
They wipe my tears, they make me wet....
I feel bad for them,
they have too much responsibility....
I need for someone to hold them....
I am out... Sad...
Published 7th Dec 2011
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Anonymous
7th Dec 2011 8:47pm
Paloma,
OMG! I can't believe I was just going to post one titled "Your Hand". Maybe our muses were planning a duet? LOL!!!
What an interesting way to look at your hands. I like the character you've given them and their needing to be held. Great work.
tornado
OMG! I can't believe I was just going to post one titled "Your Hand". Maybe our muses were planning a duet? LOL!!!
What an interesting way to look at your hands. I like the character you've given them and their needing to be held. Great work.
tornado
Shukran! (Thank you!) Great minds DO think alike!!
I was crying when I wrote it....
I was crying when I wrote it....
