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the longing
like a bubble trapped
beneath the ice sheet
i see grief
the icy grief
the eyes
see grief
the eye
sea of grief
withholding
the tumult of an ocean
inside of a drop
that drop
with a skin
reflecting
of the oscillations
between
life and death
every breath
from the moment
that was
before
the longing
was born
beneath the ice sheet
i see grief
the icy grief
the eyes
see grief
the eye
sea of grief
withholding
the tumult of an ocean
inside of a drop
that drop
with a skin
reflecting
of the oscillations
between
life and death
every breath
from the moment
that was
before
the longing
was born
Published 9th Jun 2019
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9th Jun 2019 7:46am
Nice word-play and intriguing imagery. There is something suffocating about the symbolism of grief 'like a bubble trapped beneath the ice sheet'.
9th Jun 2019 8:31am
9th Jun 2019 2:24pm
I really like the way the poem veers from the repetition of the word 'grief' (usually associated with loss/death) and shapes it towards love. Really nice.
9th Jun 2019 2:40pm
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
9th Jun 2019 4:59pm
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10th Jun 2019 9:34pm
