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Your Name
so let’s fight, let’s dance
make me scream, pull my hair
push me down, make a scene
let’s do it anywhere, I don’t care
grab my throat, claw my back
pull me close, throw me around
grab my hips, then kiss my lips
take me right here on the ground
turn me around, and do it now
fingers grabbing everywhere
flip me over, cause it’s round two
muscles aching, take me there
to the top where we won’t stop
make me crazy, call this insane
but I just want to scream your name
make me scream, pull my hair
push me down, make a scene
let’s do it anywhere, I don’t care
grab my throat, claw my back
pull me close, throw me around
grab my hips, then kiss my lips
take me right here on the ground
turn me around, and do it now
fingers grabbing everywhere
flip me over, cause it’s round two
muscles aching, take me there
to the top where we won’t stop
make me crazy, call this insane
but I just want to scream your name
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Re. Your Name
9th Jun 2019 2:21am
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9th Jun 2019 3:26am
Thank you dear Brenda, I’m new to quasi-erotica haha, but thank you for the read, the comment and the love❤️
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9th Jun 2019 3:09pm
Welcome to the erotica world, sweet girl!!❤ You made your first piece an intense one too. Awesome job, please join us more often....
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Re: Re. Your Name
9th Jun 2019 7:29pm
Ahhh! Thank you! ❤️ I’m certainly going to be unleashing this particular inner beast more often 😛 thanks for the reads and comment!
Re. Your Name
9th Jun 2019 6:41pm
Love the flow, created a scenario in my mind ~ loved the imagery and intensity! The ending is great!
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Re: Re. Your Name
9th Jun 2019 7:30pm
Thank you dear Skye, for the read, the comment and the love❤️ It’s so greatly appreciated :)
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13th Jun 2019 7:39am
I was seriously thinking of trashing this one earlier too! Thank you, Rjm, for the read and the comment!☺️
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