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Untitled 6/2/19
There comes a time
When not even rhyme
Can save us from this fate
The world is bashing
Everyone is clashing
And no one seems to mind
Words can be strong
When they're strung along
In a way that makes you think
But not even then
Will the paper and pen
Be enough to stop the hate
When not even rhyme
Can save us from this fate
The world is bashing
Everyone is clashing
And no one seems to mind
Words can be strong
When they're strung along
In a way that makes you think
But not even then
Will the paper and pen
Be enough to stop the hate
Published 2nd Jun 2019
Author's Note
Just a little rhyming
With no meaning or timing
With no meaning or timing
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2nd Jun 2019 10:27pm
2nd Jun 2019 11:29pm
What fate? How do you know not everyone minds? Why will paper and pen not be enough to stop the hate? A good piece but I beg you to expand it just a little.
Blessings, Silence
Blessings, Silence
2nd Jun 2019 11:36pm
A powerful piece of ink. As a Daoist I know that I cannot have the yin without the yang and vice versa.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
I understand it, marina2020. What you are saying is, one day the pen will NOT be mightier than the sword.
7th Jun 2019 1:39pm
“Logic” you’re here to save poetry not the other way around, wakeup you're alive
7th Jun 2019 1:44pm
