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A Sausage Cock
( after the poet Sharon Olds )
As a man who should be self aware
like others of his gender,
I watch him on his own,
pushing an empty shopping cart
past the processed meat—
unconscious that here I am
just down the aisle by the spice rack,
where the garlic with parsley, and
hot Hungarian paprika, stand erect.
The way I imagine his member does,
encased in denim’s crush of crotch;
a sausage cock. It’s as if I’m standing
amid his blond acreage, hardly seeing him
but for the stalk of corn in a field of wheat.
As a man who should be self aware
like others of his gender,
I watch him on his own,
pushing an empty shopping cart
past the processed meat—
unconscious that here I am
just down the aisle by the spice rack,
where the garlic with parsley, and
hot Hungarian paprika, stand erect.
The way I imagine his member does,
encased in denim’s crush of crotch;
a sausage cock. It’s as if I’m standing
amid his blond acreage, hardly seeing him
but for the stalk of corn in a field of wheat.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 2nd Jun 2019
| Edited 5th Jul 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by “The Pope’s Penis” - Sharon Olds (1987)
https://www.google.com/amp/s/genius.com/amp/Sharon-olds-the-popes-penis-annotated
For The Classic Corner: Sharon Olds' Tribute “Fear of Oneself”, cohosts Ahavati & JohnnyBlaze.
https://www.google.com/amp/s/genius.com/amp/Sharon-olds-the-popes-penis-annotated
For The Classic Corner: Sharon Olds' Tribute “Fear of Oneself”, cohosts Ahavati & JohnnyBlaze.
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Re. A Sausage Cock
2nd Jun 2019 8:05am
Re: Re. A Sausage Cock
2nd Jun 2019 8:14am
Thank you Daniel, I appreciate you stopping in for a read and sharing that with me.
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2nd Jun 2019 11:53am
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Re: Re. A Sausage Cock
2nd Jun 2019 11:58am
Why thank you, Poet... and I see nothing wrong with your preference of ideals.
Re. A Sausage Cock
2nd Jun 2019 12:56pm
Excellent entry, Jade. Definitely Olds' essence here.
Best of luck in the comp.
Best of luck in the comp.
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2nd Jun 2019 1:04pm
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Re: Re. A Sausage Cock
2nd Jun 2019 1:12pm
Ah yes, we all understand the discipline of the racks.
Thanks very much, hrshy.😊
Thanks very much, hrshy.😊
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2nd Jun 2019 3:31pm
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2nd Jun 2019 5:44pm
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Re. A Sausage Cock
2nd Jun 2019 3:55pm
This is a wonderfully concise trim poem - few words that show how much you can say if they are well chosen. And these were exceptionally well chosen!
tomcat
tomcat
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Re: Re. A Sausage Cock
2nd Jun 2019 5:59pm
Did you have your morning caffeine, tommy? <3
Here, you sit down at this little round table while I go get you some.
😬☕️
Here, you sit down at this little round table while I go get you some.
😬☕️
Re. A Sausage Cock
Anonymous
4th Jun 2019 7:42pm
Gosh! I think I know someone who'd love it ;D
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4th Jun 2019 8:07pm
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2019 8:46pm
Oh how did you know? Haha!
I know a certain lady who'd love it; that lady is the one I see a lot.
I know a certain lady who'd love it; that lady is the one I see a lot.
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4th Jun 2019 10:02pm
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2019 11:14pm
Of course it is. Haha!
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Re. A Sausage Cock
4th Jun 2019 8:19pm
I've always maintained:
"Though filet mignon is a choice cut of meat, there's nothing wrong of having a hankering for a big chuck of bologna from time to time."
Enjoyed this read
"Though filet mignon is a choice cut of meat, there's nothing wrong of having a hankering for a big chuck of bologna from time to time."
Enjoyed this read
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4th Jun 2019 10:05pm