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Miss Fortune💵
Time flies, and already
It’s the first of the month.
Business has been lousy,
And I’m feelin’ the crunch.
I hardly saved the scratch
To pay obligations.
Can’t recall what was that
“Hoes” accommodations.
Ain’t got much to show for,
Just a handful of jack.
I once made a lot more
With each john in the sack.
It’s the food, rent & booze
Always eats up the coin.
Pretty soon, I can’t loose,
To a nunnery I’ll join.
Image by comp host & member Michael Goodridge
Published 2nd Jun 2019
Author's Note
For Michael Goodridge’s comp “B.D.H.”
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2nd Jun 2019 3:47pm
3rd Jun 2019 4:23am
Aw thank you, tommy. And I love when you laugh from the core like that... makes me wanna look behind me and ask aloud “Hey, who did that?”😆
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3rd Jun 2019 3:11am
3rd Jun 2019 3:50am
lol yah I know, and thanks for your visit for the read, Daniel.
It was part of the comp rules, to use the image. So naturally, I did my treatment re: the theme, with a twist.
All I know is I enjoyed writing it my way!😁
It was part of the comp rules, to use the image. So naturally, I did my treatment re: the theme, with a twist.
All I know is I enjoyed writing it my way!😁
