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Missing You in the First Degree
the memories of you
still remain so fresh
and yet
the first thing
that escaped my mind
was the sound of your voice
and the pain was deafening
still remain so fresh
and yet
the first thing
that escaped my mind
was the sound of your voice
and the pain was deafening
Published 30th May 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
30th May 2019 11:15am
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Anonymous
30th May 2019 11:44am
A person's voice is so unique to that person to define them. We never really forget it, but not being heard anymore, it sounds of definite. I can feel the anguish in this write. The ultimate loss of someone dear happens when we lose the essence of the being: voice, scent, image. It's the principle of bereavement. You express it very well.
30th May 2019 2:15pm
Exactly, that is when the actual loss happens. I'm happy that this seems to resonate with you. Thank you for your kindness.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
30th May 2019 11:44am
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30th May 2019 2:16pm
I had no idea this would resonate like it did. It felt very personal to publish, but I am glad I did.
It's an honor to be able to take your breath away for a bit. Just don't lose your voice. ;)
Cheers and thanks
It's an honor to be able to take your breath away for a bit. Just don't lose your voice. ;)
Cheers and thanks
