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The Path
It seems so long,
That I laid my head to rest,
This moment I pause,
This path that is set.
A path I chose,
I wonder of progress made,
From the start where I rose,
The path ahead I will now take.
That I laid my head to rest,
This moment I pause,
This path that is set.
A path I chose,
I wonder of progress made,
From the start where I rose,
The path ahead I will now take.
Published 29th May 2019
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15th Oct 2019 7:32pm
13th Mar 2020 3:24am
17th Dec 2019 1:14am
This is really relatable. Best of luck on that path you have chosen! Great writing!
It's reminiscent, to me, of a poem that I wrote, called a "A New Beginning":
"Standing at the peak of the mountain of life, an omniscient view around me.
What lies behind me, a troubled past, but a memory inside my head.
Where I stand is solid ground, a place to rest my tired mind;
And to the skies I see my future shining bright before my eyes."
It's reminiscent, to me, of a poem that I wrote, called a "A New Beginning":
"Standing at the peak of the mountain of life, an omniscient view around me.
What lies behind me, a troubled past, but a memory inside my head.
Where I stand is solid ground, a place to rest my tired mind;
And to the skies I see my future shining bright before my eyes."
13th Mar 2020 3:21am
