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Mi amor

Mi amor
Como la lluvia barría los lirios brillando en la mañana
Tus ojos relucientes son como ventanas de ébano.
A una tierra secreta de amor
Donde ningún alma ha conocido temor.
Tu sonrisa es como la flor de verano más dulce.
Más vibrante que cualquier color.
tu beso es tan atractivo
Un veneno de amor eso es adictivo
infinitamente tentador
dejando un alma apasionadamente ardiendo
caminando en belleza
irradiando con gracia y nobleza
Eres mi amor
Eres perfecto hasta el más mínimo detalle.
para la belleza eres una diosa
eterna e infinitamente preciosa

(English)
As rain swept lillies glisten in the morn'
Your glistening eyes are like ebony windows
To a secret land of love
Where no soul has known fear
Your smile is like the sweetest summer flower.
More vibrant then any colour
Your kiss is so inviting
A poison of love that is addictive
Endlessly enticing
Leaving a soul passionately burning
Walking in beauty
Radiating with grace and nobility
You are my love
You are perfect down to the smallest detail
To beauty you are a goddess
Eternally and endlessly precious
Written by Necromancer311
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Author's Note
If someone could correct my spanish it would be wonderful, it is my 5th language and I am still trying.
(After afrikaans, english, sesotho, and isixhosa)
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